| "Changing Shape" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Resse [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!that was a crazy story.where'd u even get the idea for that one.i mean man.wow is all i can say.Holl!
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you make a sequel to this?
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Reviewed By: Chibi_Shinigami13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story! i loved it! XD calling hiei a mom was really funny, same with yusuke. lol |
Reviewed By: madame_knight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fan fiction, then I went and read the Gundam Wing fan fiction you mentioned. Both almost seem like they are written by two different authors. You changed your style with each. The GW story, though not finished, is very well planned out and has a lot of explanation and is fleshed out alot. I haven't even watched that much of the series, but really liked your story.
Now onto this one. This was a really interesting idea. I was really looking forward to see where you were going with it. You had some very unique ideas that I did like a lot. The problem was, you didn't spend much time fleshing out those ideas. At times I was lost as to what was going on because of the lack of detail. The final chapter was really rushed sounding. Because of that the ending was a bit disappointing. Overall, the story was unique and had some very interesting ideas. I would like to see you explore those ideas a little more. It was though, a great idea and I enjoyed it very much. |
Reviewed By: Serene Jackson O'Neill On: November 02, 2002 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A question...does Hiei go back to normal? Otherwise, it's a pretty good fic and you need to update! ::is begging:: |
Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The prologue is too short, but it's alright. I like how you've been writing this so far though. Keep up the good work, and update soon! |
