| "Poison" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:24 CDT
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This was so sad... Yet pretty at the same time. I love your wrtting style, it is very unique. Also your proper grammar is another bonous... Yeah I know I talk about Grammar a lot but it means a lot to me. I like being able to read your story with no problems. And as I said it was a very good story... Almost believable... I could sort of see Hiei doing this... you kept him fairly in character...Heak you kept alost all of them in character... In fact I think the only thing that really bothered me about the fanfic was when you said that Yusuke's family, Kurama's family and Kuwabara's sister had died... There seemed to be no emotion in that. However, aside from that part is was very well done.
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Title: My Post
Reviewed By: Yersi Fanel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Clamp her hands* really good one, I think this is one of the best I have read, congratulations.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 00:50 CST
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That was great! I loved it even if you did make Hiei a real bastard. Great story!
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Reviewed By: deaths angel On: February 17, 2004 07:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sob sob sob so sad waaaaa!
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Title: ooh
Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 18:53 CST
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you know, if hiei was really evil, than i would be even more deeply in love with him...*sigh*
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Reviewed By: Reece On: July 21, 2003 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read this story over and over again it just get better ever time. i just wanna cry for poor kurama and hiei. |
Reviewed By: vegetaslady12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 15:23 CDT
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ok, this is the second time iv reviewedthis story, (vegetaslady) It gets better every time i read it, its probably one of the best yu yu hakusho nc-17 stories out here. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 23:42 CDT
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That's really, really, really, really, super good! Poor Kurama... |
Reviewed By: vegetalady On: April 06, 2003 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i seriously have a lump in my throut for poor kurama, reading this story, i felt his pain. This story was amazing, absolully magnificent, bravo |
Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, I felt how Kurama felt when Hiei did all that stuff to him...oy...now I'm gonna have to drink something! Either way I really enjoyed this fanfic. Good job in writing it! |
