Reviewed By: DarkBunnyRabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Not bad.....Of course I helped with it.... Grammer I gave you an 8 because I can never trust you with stuff like that. 8 in enjoyment because theres not that much excitment in it. But I do like the parts that say, "He was coming.", "It has begon.", etc. Other than that, not bad. I liked the summery too. Well, Good luck!! |
