| "Shattered Emeralds" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Eilonnwy On: May 29, 2004 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. I wish you had continued it. The AU is soooo awesome. I love the Hiraki pairing. I hope you might actually finish this!
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Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH gosh!!! @_@ The angst!!!! The angst!!! That Muraki is scary..., but anyways... I love the flow. Poor Watari there. Overall I like the suspense and the angst. Nice work ^__^ Keep it up and update soon please!!! |
Reviewed By: Kikki On: March 18, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Very original. Your writing style is beautiful as well. You're going to continue it, right? Please! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
that was sooooooo good you have to update again soon please!!! |
Reviewed By: lozzo On: February 12, 2003 06:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really getting into this fic. Are you going to be continuing it?
I can never get enough of Hisoka-torture! And this one is well-written. Cool. |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 05:57 CST
Comment/Review:
hhhm. This sounds pretty good so far. i would like to see what happens next. So please update it again soon. Poor Hisoka. Would you be able to write the main parings on this please. If it isn't too much trouble. Keep up the good work. Tsuzuki/Hisoka foreva.
ja ne |
Reviewed By: Caroltrue On: January 18, 2003 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutely stunning. It's a very original concept and you keep all the characters so in character.
I love how you've developed Watari and poor Hisoka-kun! *adores Hisoka* Ah, it's such wonderful torture.
I can't wait to see how you play it out. It's very intruging so far and I am helplessly hooked. Please write more soon, this is just wonderful yummy stuff. Well done. |
Reviewed By: icediamond On: December 07, 2002 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I just found it due to someone desperately seeking it after the whole ff.net deal, and it's great. I love the whole concept. And I can't wait to see Muraki get his ass kicked. And in case you're wondering why I only gave you a nine out of ten, I'll only give tens to fics that I plan on checking every day, which this isn't quite at that lever - yet. Happy writing. |
Reviewed By: Aspara On: November 24, 2002 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's fun and intruiging although I'm not really into the fact that Watari was the first one to see Hisoka cry. Another thing is that I don't like the fact that Tsuzuki is also being hunted in this story. For some reason, I only want Hisoka-torture. I want all Muraki's attention and Tsuzuki's attention on him alone.
Most of my reasons for giving you a nine rather than a ten is based on my own tastes. It really has nothing much to do with the way you wrote the story or the plot. In fact, I find it fantastic. |
Reviewed By: nekoi On: November 20, 2002 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you've rated the fanfic, please try to explain your reasoning behind your rating ???
well me I just want to say that I looove it and hope really really much that you will continu it and soon if it possible |
Reviewed By: Amanda 02 On: November 04, 2002 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. I think the concept is original and the writing is engaging. I look forward to reading more. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: JJ On: October 22, 2002 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Immaculate and gorgeously written. I've been looking for this fic ever since FFNET went Nazi on us, and very much hope you'll continue it.
Please? |
Reviewed By: Locura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 14:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Neat idea! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^__^ Keep writing. |
