| "Twin Dark Crystals" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: :)
Reviewed By: Jupiters Light [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please write more soon!!
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Title: adorable akane
Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn!! Email me when u do! silversaori@yahoo.com Ja Mata
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Reviewed By: Cat On: March 22, 2003 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! I really want to read chapter 3. I cant wait to see what happeneds next time. |
Reviewed By: lu_inverse On: December 02, 2002 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of lemme say,I luved it and can't wait for the rest^^.However there has to b just a little constuctive critisism... You should get some1 to proofread it so u can get rid of the very tiny grammatical errors. Also, why did luna have to die (pouts)? Other than that its a great story that really captivates the reader. I look foward to reading your next chapter(s) ^_^
ps. if ya need some1 to proofread, i would be happy to volunteer. Just contact me at inverse@elp.rr.com |
