| "Belonging To Someone" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! All I can say is wow. It was so well-written. Im about to cry. Your usage of words were perfect. I swear I'm in tears. It was so sweet. You made Yohji and Aya the perfect couple. I absolutely love it. Continue to write and I will continue to review. The story is wonderful!!!
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Reviewed By: IcaBob On: June 09, 2003 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I had your tallent for writing. *sigh* Keep this up. Your amazing! |
Reviewed By: Leeyanora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Konnichi wa!
Wah, I just love AyaxYohji!!! Well, YohjixAya is OK, too... ^__^ And itīs great written, too! Wow! Uhm, hoppe to read more of your Fics soon? Really like them!
Dewa mata, Leeya |
Reviewed By: Lady Pluto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 19:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Glomps Rain*
I swear, you are one of the best, as in top 10, authors that I have known. God I love you! |
Reviewed By: Kato-chan On: September 23, 2002 11:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! This was so beautiful and amazing. Lighthearted, immensely enjoyable. It put me in such a great mood. The snuggling scenes (my fave!).... Youji being such a gentleman... *sigh* what a wonderful story.
It's a nice break from all the angst. The way you developed their relationship slowly and Ran's eventual acceptance and trust in Youji was so sweet and realistic. I was smiling the whole time.
I have to print out fics to read them b/c of limited net access at work and I usually throw them away afterwards. But this one I didn't have the heart to throw away. I absolutely loved it. Beautiful, simply beautiful. I know I'm going to be rereading this fic many many many times.
Kato-chan ^_^
P.S.: You should post this to the YoujixAyaML! |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
It is good to read something romantic with a happy end from time to time. Sigh. That was soooo sweet. |
Reviewed By: Theresa On: September 22, 2002 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! It was so sweet and endearing. Sometimes all the angsty Yohji/Aya stories get a little repetitive so it is very nice to read a story with real feelings and a happy ending. Thank you so much for writing. |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!! This is so good! Thankyou thankyou thankyou. I just read ur email and couldn't wait to read this. This was really sweet Rain. I for someone that writes only angst, was extremely happy to read something that is light and sweet. The fact how Aya slowly learns to accepts Yohji trust I believe was very in character, and the way you wrote Yohji... How romantic! Bringing a flower each day for Aya ...that is really nice. And the lemon...woah!!! I love how u write ur lemons...it's always so great! The whole atmosphere you created was just so suiting for the couple, especially the beach and the snuggling scenes. I love this...I really do. It will always be something I will read again whenever life really suxs. Thanks for even considering to write a fic for me. Your real sweet for doing so.
And I know it must have been hard for u to write this fic - I notice when I read ur blog u wrote it a few times. Sorry! I felt bad because u were hving a hard time writing this. But I'm sure the drafts were really great anyway.
Hoping to read ur other WK story as well. Uke Aya! Woohoo! I love. And can't wait to read Training Skills, I'm very curious to c how Seifer is going to fix up all this mess. If only I can draw Squall and Seifer I would sent u my graditudes by drawing u a fanart. Hmmm...yes yes maybe I should work on that too. ^___^
Thanks again Rainy deary. Love ya! *hugs and kisses* You're the best!
Sardius |
