| "All Digidestined" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: disapointed On: February 04, 2005 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't mean to flame butthis is not a very good fan fic. It just seems like the chars. jump into bed the second they get there. Why in gods name did you spend so much time with the meal? It's not important to the plot. You should work on that.
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: February 24, 2004 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting, but on your next one, you should put in more detail of what they exactly do.
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Reviewed By: Toa On: January 01, 2003 17:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Look,continue the story before I get sicker and have to search for morestories |
Reviewed By: Jia Hao(also at fanfic.net)aka. Toa On: December 21, 2002 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is pretty vomit to a 10 YEAR OLD but that Oswama(dun,dun,dun!)is o.k.
Osama(dun,dun,dun!):I love those special effects!
Me:Who let Osama(dun,dun,dun!)out! |
Reviewed By: Night Blaze On: September 24, 2002 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, Nate. You're my age, and you're writing lemons! What the fuck! lol. Fun or not?
hey, write another lemon, only all dai and kari. lol, hence the name Daikari |
Reviewed By: Mastero [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That fic was strange but funny. Tajun (Takeru\TK & Jun) is a very origional pairing, I've only seen it done once before in an insane fic (But it had alot of crazy pairings and made very little sence). I find that most Dakari fans pair him either with a made up charactor or with Catherine (Frence Digidestined) if ther pair him with anyone at all. Is Cody's nameless girl friend suppose to be Chichos\Rosa? (The Mexican Digidestined). Just wondering cause she is the only digistined his age. |
