| "Intruding Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Pengu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 12:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you really hit the nail on the head with this one. There are a lot of people out there that have no tolerance for homosexuality, and that sad realization is one of those people could be your friend. There's not always a happy ending. That's just part of cruel reality. Kudos to you for writing this.
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Title: squee
Reviewed By: Pallid_painter On: September 01, 2004 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked how you wrote this and the whole plot of the story. It makes a lot of sense... Not everyone would be okay with gay couples and such, because it's different. I hope to read more stories by you. Good job and jaa ne!
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Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
*squeeks* *huggles Omi and Ken, then kicks Aya* Bad Aya! This was so good, and so.. I dunno.. sad I guess. Kinda. I'm all hurty in me chest now. ;.; But I liked it ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, this is a rather realistic story. Yes, you are right. Most Yaoi stories deal with homosexuality as if it isn't a problem, but couldn't it have been a Happy End? |
Reviewed By: Akeru On: September 22, 2002 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first review at Mediaminer and I hope I got the rating thing right. 10 points mean good and 1 point means bad, don't they?. That would be logical.
Now to the story. Your're right, in yaoi/yuri fics they are either all gay or at least accept it. I never truly thought about people beeing against yaoi/yuri. At least not in fanfics.
Now, since I'm a total yaoi/yuri fan and I don't know anyone who's homophobic this fic seems a bit unrealistic to me.
I can't believe there are people who really hate someone because of them beeing gay.
And for your writing style, I like it. It's not difficult or confusing. I'd say it makes the whole fic even more interesting.
Ja ne |
