Reviewed By: blackfire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
One major thing I noticed was that 'master peace' should be 'masterpiece'. You left a good cliffhanger in case you want to do a sequel. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this story. |
