| "Stuck In A Jeep With You" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: 1x2 enthusiast On: July 11, 2005 16:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe. am totally amused by this fic. it was sort of ooc but whatever it was fun to read. hope that duo and heero get stuck in more traffic jams in the future. The part when heero punched that guy, I actually did that once while i was stuck in a traffic jam. This guy kept on acting like the biggest asshole next to my car so I got out and punched him and then he finally shut up. hehe nyways keep writing more 1x2 fics.
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Reviewed By: Liei On: July 22, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!!! Some of the spelling was wrong. The originality was awesome! I loved the car blowing up and Heero carrying Duo home. I thought Heero was going to kill the dude in the black car. He got off lucky with just a bloody nose. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Jenn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 17:34 CST
Comment/Review:
recovering for his first organism? hahahahahaha!! sorry, but that's the greatest thing i've ever seen!
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Reviewed By: Robofetus0 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
"Heero still recovering for his first organism" is the greatest typo I've ever come across. |
Reviewed By: blackfire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were many minor errors within the text that made me think that Englidh might not be your first language. I have read many GW characters in car/truck stories, so this wasn't the most original. I think that someone should read it indepth and point out the minor mistakes to you. I could do so if you want. Keep it up. |
