| "Forbidden Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 05, 2003 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny and enjoyable, but doesn't actually sound like Gohan,Vegeta maybe, but not Gohan. It was great though. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Winddancer On: June 19, 2002 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it again, beutiful. Totally outstanding. You truely brought out bulma's naughty side! ;) |
Reviewed By: point26 On: May 06, 2002 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats just great majorly funny pls write more lemons |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 08:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very steamy. What is Bulma doing? I need to know, you must right more. |
Reviewed By: PrincessBulma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2002 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I've never thought of those two as a pair, but your style of writing is quite good! Write another chapter please! |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus On: January 07, 2002 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, bad Bulma. I think I've only ever read this pairing once before in Second Son, Last Chance.
But that was Mirai Bulma & Mirai Gohan. Kewl fic, I liked it. |
Reviewed By: Fleur On: November 11, 2001 02:04 CST
Comment/Review:
In some weird way, the story is good... ^_^ I like. |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 12, 2001 13:59 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic is funny as hell! |
Reviewed By: Cat chan On: November 20, 2001 23:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it !!!!!!!!!!
Please write another chapter I want to know what is going to happen in the next day.PLEASE!!!!!
I am a major Gohan,lemon fanfic reader and I am his wife so please....thanx
(Underline the wife) |
