| "Princess of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 16:09 CST
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damn, took me 2 days to read all of this story so far, but I'm greatly impressed with it. Seriously, I like th eidea of Ranma involved with the scouts (as a scout, and stuck as a girl, or helping out as a guy too), it makes for a good story. Still, more chapters would be nice (though the length of each chapter certainly makes up for the long waits between chapters, heh). Anyway, one thing I am curous about, is when are you gonna kill Gendo and Genma? Is that gonna be in the 2nd arc, or the last? Becuase frankly, Genma in this fic is a complete and utter bastard, and deserves to die in some sickeningly shitty way. Anyway, next chapter, whenever that is written, wil be greatly appreciated. Please write when you get the chance.
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Title: more
Reviewed By: noname z On: June 01, 2006 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good Fic, I like the basic-idea of this and Ranma/Sailor Moon-crossovers are great. You also have a few interesting twist and the changed characters are fitting (Nodoka, Genma, ...). I really hope you are goung to continue this soon. It has a lot of potential and has been dormant for (far) too long now. p.s.: There is nothing wrong with long chapters, I think they are great.
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 19:32 CDT
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C'mon. Longer chapters are good. They provide so much more entertainment. Please don't shorten them to much. OK? Anyways, this is a unique take on the Ranm Sailor Moon crossovers some people do, and it's working well in my opinion. Please just hurry and update soon. Oh well work calls, Ja Ne Crolynx ;p
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Reviewed By: Talent Scout [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 13:53 CST
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Sorry i kinda forgot to put this in before you're writing is... ok but you need to work on youre grammar phrases like "Alright, you've pushed me to far girl" this is a mild problem but I suggest you proofread youre stories before posting them spell check and pick up some but the grammar that most programs have is weak.
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Title: Same Type, different direction
Reviewed By: Talent Scout [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're fan fic is one of the most semi-original fanfics I've ever read most people place the story after all the scouts are found not only do you not do that but you give Ranma the title of Princess as well. Except for the overused Sailor Sun title (though it is better than giving her Sailor Moon's title) it is very orginal well structered, well grammared, and gives us reason to believe that you hate Genma with a vegence and like Happosai ;)
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Reviewed By: DJ On: January 13, 2004 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update. ' Would all the dangling plotlines be resolved? ' What happends when Jedite/Tythus (sp?) gets the energy from Vexpa through that secret energy channel now that Jedite is more like tantric-energy being? ' What is the deal with the "mystical tree" in that abandoned property that seems to normally make everyone ignore it? ' Has Nodoka been been restoring that stealthed Moon Kingdom ruin since then? Why was the city covered with a huge disguise field to begin with and what was its relationship with the rest of the kingdom? ' What effect would there be when Ranma's Devil Hunter heritage is triggered and how would it interact with all that other duties she already has? ' What are the Kuyonji's doing? This assumes that those ninjas that were attacking Genma were them. ' Is Gendo some sort of reality analogue to the Gendo of the Ikari family of Evangelion stories? '
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really cool fic!! Why haven't you updated yet? I red this fic a while ago then I come back hopeing u hav updated and u havn't!! Plz update!!
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Reviewed By: adorable akane On: September 11, 2003 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very very very long story but it's worth every second! Please write the cahpter were Ranma finds out about his mom and his mom about him ASAP |
Reviewed By: dogbertcarroll On: July 20, 2003 14:43 CDT
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Great fic. I Laughed like a loon. Email me when you update. |
Reviewed By: danny On: February 21, 2003 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this fic and im dieing for more but where in the world do you come up with this stuff!!!!! please drop ang other fics your writing at the molment and continue this one!!!!!***** |
Reviewed By: danny On: February 20, 2003 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive only red up to chapter 5 but im liking it more and more as the story goes i think this is a fanfic that you should update first. |
Reviewed By: Karlena On: November 26, 2002 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! one of the best crossovers I have read and it is really well written! can't wait till the next chapter comes out!! :) |
Reviewed By: Karlena On: November 26, 2002 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it, love it, love it!!!! :):):) write more soon please! good mix of comedy and action! |
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i like it so far Heh
keep going.
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Reviewed By: clowangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey! that was awesome!! i loved it! i hope u continue it as soon as u can! ^_^ im sooo looking forward to the next part to this! Good luck on the rest of it. |
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