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Reviewed By: teturo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always happy to see more for playing with Ranma, but didn't this chapter get tied into the wrong story?
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Reviewed By: ordieth117 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 22:26 CDT
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Good stuff to me. Don't be afraid to ask on forums if you find yourself distrusting your instincts.
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Reviewed By: クリス On: July 21, 2008 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this fic is very good. Please continue with it as I would love to continue reading it. クリス Kurisu
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Title: Princess
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, but I hope that your muse is not entirely dead on this story. I place it as your best, tied with 'Playing'
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, but I hope that your muse is not entirely dead on this story. I place it as your best, tied with 'Playing'
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, but I hope that your muse is not entirely dead on this story. I place it as your best, tied with 'Playing'
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, but I hope that your muse is not entirely dead on this story. I place it as your best, tied with 'Playing'
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Title: Princess
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, but I hope that your muse is not entirely dead on this story. I place it as your best, tied with 'Playing'.
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Reviewed By: ranchee On: February 01, 2007 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a most awesome fic i was dissapointed when you stopes so long ago please please please continue this is one of the best crossovers i have ever read i give it 3 thumbs up.I cant wait ti see ranma start rembering hi/ her past life should be entertaing.I just cant say enought about this all are a 10 you made some minor grmattical errors but way good overall.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 16:09 CST
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damn, took me 2 days to read all of this story so far, but I'm greatly impressed with it. Seriously, I like th eidea of Ranma involved with the scouts (as a scout, and stuck as a girl, or helping out as a guy too), it makes for a good story. Still, more chapters would be nice (though the length of each chapter certainly makes up for the long waits between chapters, heh). Anyway, one thing I am curous about, is when are you gonna kill Gendo and Genma? Is that gonna be in the 2nd arc, or the last? Becuase frankly, Genma in this fic is a complete and utter bastard, and deserves to die in some sickeningly shitty way. Anyway, next chapter, whenever that is written, wil be greatly appreciated. Please write when you get the chance.
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Title: more
Reviewed By: noname z On: June 01, 2006 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good Fic, I like the basic-idea of this and Ranma/Sailor Moon-crossovers are great. You also have a few interesting twist and the changed characters are fitting (Nodoka, Genma, ...). I really hope you are goung to continue this soon. It has a lot of potential and has been dormant for (far) too long now. p.s.: There is nothing wrong with long chapters, I think they are great.
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 19:32 CDT
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C'mon. Longer chapters are good. They provide so much more entertainment. Please don't shorten them to much. OK? Anyways, this is a unique take on the Ranm Sailor Moon crossovers some people do, and it's working well in my opinion. Please just hurry and update soon. Oh well work calls, Ja Ne Crolynx ;p
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Reviewed By: Talent Scout [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 13:53 CST
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Sorry i kinda forgot to put this in before you're writing is... ok but you need to work on youre grammar phrases like "Alright, you've pushed me to far girl" this is a mild problem but I suggest you proofread youre stories before posting them spell check and pick up some but the grammar that most programs have is weak.
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Title: Same Type, different direction
Reviewed By: Talent Scout [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're fan fic is one of the most semi-original fanfics I've ever read most people place the story after all the scouts are found not only do you not do that but you give Ranma the title of Princess as well. Except for the overused Sailor Sun title (though it is better than giving her Sailor Moon's title) it is very orginal well structered, well grammared, and gives us reason to believe that you hate Genma with a vegence and like Happosai ;)
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Reviewed By: DJ On: January 13, 2004 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update. ' Would all the dangling plotlines be resolved? ' What happends when Jedite/Tythus (sp?) gets the energy from Vexpa through that secret energy channel now that Jedite is more like tantric-energy being? ' What is the deal with the "mystical tree" in that abandoned property that seems to normally make everyone ignore it? ' Has Nodoka been been restoring that stealthed Moon Kingdom ruin since then? Why was the city covered with a huge disguise field to begin with and what was its relationship with the rest of the kingdom? ' What effect would there be when Ranma's Devil Hunter heritage is triggered and how would it interact with all that other duties she already has? ' What are the Kuyonji's doing? This assumes that those ninjas that were attacking Genma were them. ' Is Gendo some sort of reality analogue to the Gendo of the Ikari family of Evangelion stories? '
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