| "that's the spicy meatball" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Reviewed By: PLURisdekey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not exactly the best ficcie as it seems, but i like the anzu/mai pairngs, other wise it is off topic...qiute mediocre if U ask me. try better someday ^_^
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Reviewed By: Android raptor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!? That was posibly the most poorly written NC-17 fic I have ever read. And why the hell is it in the 08th section? This is Yu-Gi-Oh, not 08th.
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Title: THIS IS SHIT
Reviewed By: hatemaster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 11:41 CST
Comment/Review:
FLAME MASTER here whats that i smell cow....no sheep..no its bullshit because thats what your stories are :( (FLAME MASTER)
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Reviewed By: Scruffy the Janitor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 15:51 CST
Comment/Review:
********twitching eye**********
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Reviewed By: italian chika On: November 05, 2003 21:12 CST
Comment/Review:
r u memicing italians with that title u better hope not cuz i am italian! well ne wayz ui like yo fic and GO ITALIAN MOFIA!!! u hit us we hit u!!!my dad was a part of the mofia untell they killed him 4 snitchin on them
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Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: July 27, 2003 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic Black Luster Soldier and everyone i believe there's gonna be a Zoid story because it's under this anime but this is under all the animes that will be in this story and i've only seen two Tea/Mai lemons on the net and this one was o.k. but a little short so i say it was good but not good enough for 10/10. |
Reviewed By: rohan On: May 10, 2003 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
duded wtf is it doing in a zoid section? |
Reviewed By: dude On: April 20, 2003 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this is a zoid section what is yu gi oh doing here oh well |
Reviewed By: the sex dragon On: March 22, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Pulls away from girlfriend in bed to go on the net
"where the hell are you goin'? git back here!"*
anyway, i think this fanfic ROCKS!!! although i would like som zoids.i love zoids. pleeeez make more sugar, coz sex rulz!holy shit! my girl is gettin pissed!gotta go!
*gets back into bed, kisses girl pasionately, rams penis into vagina while nibbling lightly, girl moans, harder harder you fucking fiend harder!then orgazm hits and pumps seed into her and finito!* |
Reviewed By: Kai-chan2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 17:18 CST
Comment/Review:
God some of you peeps can be hurtful! If the person can't write a fic just say that u didn't like it. you don't have to go all out and say that was the most stupidest thing i ever read or thnx for makin me waste only 15 minuets of my life. HELLO!!!!! fifteen minuets of reading a fic that you don't like isn't gonna kill you unless you r on ur deathbed waitin to die! And you mimi glassforde is it really nessessary to say all that! Anyways it was a preety bad fic but you could really work on doing more descriptive writing. |
Reviewed By: Hunter0 On: February 20, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Saay whaa?
I'm sorry, but something escapes me:
What does a Y-G-O "lezbo" fic have to do with any other series, like 08thMS, Bebop, Gundam WIng, OR Zoids?!!!
Not only that, but this thing is a major "deja-vu".
Before the limitation to NC-17, I read 10, maybe 20 Hentai fic that happened EXACTLY THE SAME WAY AS THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PS: Please be so kind as to change your pen name:
You are a disgrace the glorious Black Luster Soldier.
ATTACK, RED-EYES BLACK DRAGON! OBLITERATE THAT AUTHOR! |
Reviewed By: Cloud9 On: January 28, 2003 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
where's the zoids' stuff?you idiot, put this stuff in yugioh . houw can this b a crossover if its about 1 thing.Mai/Tea combo suks. CRAPPy delete this shit |
Reviewed By: The Last Face On: January 19, 2003 18:02 CST
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Sorry, but I didn't get past "wanna come to my place?" (Your capitalization error)
I'm sure they're all correct about your skill, but I prefer plausibility. Or, at least, a lead-in more than eight sentences long. |
Reviewed By: ~*angel*~ On: January 06, 2003 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
um......k then.......yeah........interesting...................... |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 10:52 CST
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Dude This isnt tha good, hate to break it to you. Your style PRVOES you havent written alot of these and you write the same way the guy who wrote "Trunks Little Book of Hentai Short Stories" wrote, Like in the begining when they bump into each other she says: "My place isnt far from here, wanna play?" which is the EXACT same thing that hapens between Bulma and Chi-Chi in the other fic. Basically try harder next time |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mimi, what were you high on when you wrote that last part? Also, I understand the value of constructive criticism, but if you don't like a fic, just click back and move on. I mean, is it really that important to tell someone they suck. |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mimi, what were you high on when you wrote that last part? Also, I understand the value of constructive criticism, but if you don't like a fic, just click back and move on. I mean, is it really that important to tell someone they suck. |
Reviewed By: Mimi Glassforde On: December 16, 2002 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Holy crap. The Hamtaro fanfic where all the freakin hampsters did was rape eachother was better then this. I could pull a better fic outta my ass! If not for the "no NC-17 rule' you should have this on FF.net. because FF.net is the sespool for people who think they can write, but cant. I also notice that this girl has NO FUCKIN' IDEA how a female orgasms. Morons...go away now. your stupid, cant write and I will run you over with my riding lawnmower of grim justice, smack you with a golf club, and fly away to the moon, laughing and wearing a sweater vest. maybe you should write a Mary sue hun, then I COULD HATE YOU MORE! HAHAHAHA |
Reviewed By: Yo Ho! On: November 20, 2002 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good fic put more please |
Reviewed By: Dragannia On: October 30, 2002 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is gay. that is all |
Reviewed By: jster1983 On: October 13, 2002 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You Magnificent bastard I salute you tough I am a straight man. Do more please. |
Reviewed By: Thrall On: October 06, 2002 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok y the fuck is this in the zoids section this is fuckin gay yu-gi-oh |
Reviewed By: Person On: October 05, 2002 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was dumb....Thank you for wasting my time. |
Reviewed By: Kurapika On: October 04, 2002 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! Keep it up! Pls continue... |
Reviewed By: storm fury On: September 22, 2002 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm excellent story keep writing sex included |
