| "A Night at Mai's" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: magalink On: September 06, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 18:51 CST
Comment/Review:
This is very impressive! I have got to say that the teachers at the school are morons. This whole story has great and funny lemons. Adios!
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Reviewed By: Bluejay2099 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 23:34 CST
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Tis isn't my thing, so I won't be judgemental. All I can say is that even the most smutty fic should have some kind of feeling in it. Also something a little more descriptive than "deep-thraoted" would be nice. I must also take this chance to promote my favorite lemon on MediaMiner. "All's fair in love and dueling, chapter 3" possibly the best Yugi/Anzu lemon there is. Other than that, pretty good, the doogy stuff is disturbing though...
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Reviewed By: SSJ Ryoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 10:29 CDT
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yo, dis waz great. i wonder if any of Seto's ancestor's were in the movie "Deliverance"? |
Reviewed By: Danielle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really likedthe parings, except the Kaiba/Joey pair. But It's a tight fic! Add more threesomes!! |
Reviewed By: zcreed On: January 18, 2003 13:52 CST
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I read the fanfic and it was asum. could you write one mai/tea/haipie lady but I don't think you could. |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luved it! Great pairings, descriptive, and most important of all, lemony! Didn't really like the KaibaxJoey thing but it was funny. Please add more! |
Reviewed By: shindig On: November 28, 2002 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story i've ever read. Minus the parts with kaiba and joey. (the paradox brothers were annoying too). |
Reviewed By: Tea On: October 26, 2002 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I never knew I fucked that much!!By the way my real name is Bakura's gurl!! |
Reviewed By: Queen Of Curses On: October 13, 2002 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yup, i read the first few chappies before the banning of nc-17 at ff.net.
lovely how it went. though, i must say that i totally hate tea, mai, and serenity. i usually don't read stuff with male/female couplings, but this is special.
i'm not lesbian or anything, but i kinda prefer male/male couples. but joey/kaiba was okay. oi, i'm starting to ramble again. well, this fic was real original.
such a pity nc-17 fics were banned at ff.net. now all i could do is read limes back there. and i'm so lucky i found out bout this site.
overall, i thought ur fic was great. BTW, do u have a thing for cats or something? i don't mean to b rude, i was just curious. well, bye.... |
Reviewed By: Chiwizard On: September 30, 2002 15:07 CDT
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Hah, I read this back in the good old days before they hacked off NC-17! It's still good! |
Reviewed By: thunderfox On: September 23, 2002 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you make more stuff with Mai and Yugi |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi your doing very good in humor and lemon you have my respect, opps too mushy you did good bye bye |
Reviewed By: black luster soldier [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 10:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was great and good parings too i didn't like mai/joey but yugi/mai is awesome!!!! anzu/bakura is ok too so you must write more!!!!!!! plz i'll be your bestest friend |
