| "Altiverse: Dawn of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Lonny On: October 21, 2002 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
No worries, the continuation will get better. Next chapter will have the Z-Fighters...it's just hard to write consistently!! Thank god for mangas. |
Reviewed By: Starwake321 On: October 18, 2002 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a veeeery good story, but the sequel "Pride and Hope" was not a very good continuation. You should write more about the future with the Z warriors. That is if you have the time. |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wooooooooow! Awesome!! What a good fic!! I really like it!! But how is it gonna continue with Adrian? Are Vegeta and Vaya get 'm back sometime?
And that 'pride and hope' is that the continueation (I suck at writing english, it's not my motherlenguage) from this story? |
Reviewed By: Rainesama On: September 22, 2002 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already read this fic at another site and I'm waitin' for the next chapters. Hurry up! You already know why I chose my ratings, I LOVE this fic, even if it isn't V/B. Keep doin' whatcha doin' Lonny!! |
