| "Sway" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: dresslikeinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 16:20 CDT
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Nicely done, but the whole angsty section really made me want to cry. But anyway, I like it. BTW: I believe 'hikari' means "light" in Japanese. I'm not sure about "my little light".
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Reviewed By: ok..... On: April 21, 2004 18:42 CDT
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you have me comepltly confuzzled you ko that i have no clue what happened and what didnt... plz tell us all
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Reviewed By: Nasyki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gak...gonna...barff....sooooooo sick....your story was 100%...but u almost killed me sevral times, literally, in there...but I guess that that is more of my falt and the fact when the writing is good enough I become the character... *coughing(not a joke I can't breathe)* 'god damn you and the fact u r 1 of the good writers!!!' thinked 2 self...this is 1 of the best fics I've read on this site!!! so from now on I will become more picky about the good 1s, and who to call good and who to not!!!! U is a gooooooooooooooooooooooood author!!! Not as good as Xpyne...(I worship her) but u is good...(writing, u tie wit her)^-^v please and thank u write morrrrrrrrrreeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! -_- or else I'll cry... *-*;;I don't mean it...
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Reviewed By: Konpeitou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 00:56 CST
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Poor Yami-Yuugi... he's going to turn into a raving lunatic! Hmm.. interesting thought...
Hnnnng~!! Utter kawaii-ness of Yuugi and Yami Yuugi ^___^
As for the thing about the puzzle being called the sennen puzzle, all of them are called that; the Sennen Items. Sen means thousand in Japanese and nen means year. So it's basically called the "Thousand Years Puzzle" aka, millenium puzzle. ^^
Strange story, but good! |
Reviewed By: Kari On: November 29, 2002 22:41 CST
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Sigh, I have read fic after fic and I'm just goin insane here cause they're not complete. I'm gonna lose it soon if you don't put out another chapter. BTW, nice Seto/Yami action. ;-) |
Reviewed By: IsaacandBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRE I love it. the suspence the love the deadly graphic aquires. MORE MUST HAVE MORE MORE YUUGIxYAMI YEAH NO MORE EVIL COCK SUCKING LOSERS LIKE SETO AND PEGUSUS
Blade: what he's trying to say is that he wants more of the story and he hates pegusus and seto. I personaly hate pegusus, but seto's ok.
Isaac: HEY WHAT DO YOU KNOW!!!! G2G MMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRE |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 13:38 CST
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YAY!!! Bunnies Bunnies Bunnies. There're hopping like bunnies WEEEEEEE!!!! LUV IT WRITE MORE WRITE MORE MUWHAHAHAHAHA.
Yami: *hentai grin* Encore!!! ENCORE!!!...
o_0?... you know French?
Yami: ^_______________^ oui oui...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH THE HORROR!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 22:40 CDT
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Well, did he? I hope so. I hate to see him suffer like this. He is my favorite character next to Yugi. Don't make him suffer anymore than he has. Please!!!!!!!!!!! I don't like to see him suffer especially when it comes to love. |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 22:39 CDT
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Well, did he? I hope so. I hate to see him suffer like this. He is my favorite character next to Yugi. Don't make him suffer anymore than he has. Please!!!!!!!!!!! I don't like to see him suffer especially when it comes to love. |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: October 19, 2002 02:20 CDT
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Yugi... and then... and he... and... oO;
Poor Yami! He's so confused... the angst (checks listing... oh that's there... I should look closer at these things...)
Pegasus's wife's name is Cecilia, in the dub... that's the best I can do for you. ^-^; |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wuv this fanfic. Please continue..quickly...NOW! *shakes her* |
Reviewed By: Sen On: September 28, 2002 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. ^_^ Which guy's gonna be having the baby....? ^_^() Post more SOON. Please? ^_- |
Reviewed By: Samantha On: September 24, 2002 18:03 CDT
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It's a great story of wierdness and f****ing up Yami like that was a stroke of genius, though I hope you don't overdo it because it appears his near to the brink where he'll need to be in a straight jacket in a white room with men dressed in lab coats and glasses poking their little sticks at him. Thought the bit with Seto Kaiba was a Kodak moment I rather like to forget but... it's cool. NOW WRITE SOME MORE!!!! (^_^) Luv you if you do. hehehe |
