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| "In Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful...the first paragraph, with it's poetic narrative pulls you in, and the rest refuse to let you go. I'm a big fan of B/V fics, and this is certainly one of the best I've seen. I liked the Mirai Bulma perspective, and the prospect of her re-uniting with Vegeta in the afterlife bought tears to my eyes. Yet you still managed to inject some very Vegeta-ish humour, that fitted in perfectly. Bravo!!
Thank you for a gorgeous fic EM, I'll be returning to this one often!! : ) | Reviewed By: Roe On: October 10, 2002 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love it and Susan's idea about a sequel sounds wonderful! ;) | Reviewed By: Susan On: September 22, 2002 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly amazing and the way I imagined it would've been like in Mirai Bulma's time. I read it first at Adimra's site and voted for it, but unfortunately it didn't win. Sorry. Truly a piece of work. The flashbacks were heartbreaking. I love the way you kepted both of them IC. The dream sequence was beautiful, giving Bulma a renewed sense of hope and closure. Have you thought of writing a sequel, where Bulma and ChiChi join their spouses in heaven? If you decide to write it, I will definitely read it. Bravo on a job extremely well done ^_^. | Reviewed By: *StaR* On: September 22, 2002 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I couldn't give it less. This fic will be in my favorite lists for ever...beautiful
I do hope you re write the ending some day, since you said that you could've done better. And I believe you could have.
It would be the perfect ending to the perfect fic, I really love these romantic fics that actually have intelligence in it.
Love,
*StaR*
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