| "Past Love" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: x On: September 05, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The subject was saos its been done a few times but your good |
Reviewed By: x On: September 05, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The subject was saos its been done a few times but your good |
Reviewed By: Nahaujaret On: July 16, 2003 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to be rude, but your fanfic is corny. You need to improve your writing skills and put a little more effort into it. I'm not pro, but this needs improvement. |
Reviewed By: Xander, Mechanix Army On: June 20, 2003 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, I thought Ed was a boy fo the longest time, and as a fan of Yaoi I was so into playing him/her. Now that I see her in a skirt... Anyway, I don't relally like it but it's well-written. |
Reviewed By: bakashinji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this one, it seems believable and not too OOC for me (they had a few years between the series and the story). There were quite a few spelling and grammar errors, and the constant switching detracted from the experience, but not too bad otherwise. An enjoyable lemon. |
Reviewed By: Dante 78 On: December 11, 2002 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know they would make a great pair. Keep on writing. Its really good |
Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 14:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice, can ya write some more, but dude i was never here if my mom ask's^_~ |
Reviewed By: Starwake321 On: October 05, 2002 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic. But you need to continue writing. Also the constant switching made me think Ed was a boy. |
Reviewed By: Mr. E [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting pairing, which upsets me. Don't worry, it only upsets me because I didn't think of it first.
Ah, well.
If I may offer a few words of encouragement, I'd suggest you ditch the weird line/scene dividers. They're more distracting than helpful, in my opinion.
Good luck and continued writing. |
