| "Caught!" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Open minds are always best
Reviewed By: bulma90_13 On: May 02, 2005 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very original story. Forget the idiots with closed minds. I found this fic because I had been searching for a Trunks/Bra. This is the only one I've found in english and actually makes sense. So..way to go! And as others are saying, you should continue.
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Title: Fuck naYoFadiger
Reviewed By: While your mommy was giving birth to you in the imfermory me and my buddys were fuckin your daddy's ass and makin him deepthroat our cocks bitch On: March 25, 2005 03:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
tjdtydydrfcyrfyhfhgfcg fyhfhgfkgvchkfcfgh PUT IT IN YA MOUF I SAID PUT IT IN YA MOOOUUUF! PUT IT IN YA MOUF I SAID PUT IT IN YA MOOOUUUF!
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Title: ......wow...
Reviewed By: nokiasama03 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U should write a bloody sequal already! And if you get any flames, wellll...they can go to hell. >;-)
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Reviewed By: Master Roshi On: June 05, 2003 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i see bra is taking after her dear old mum!
she'll be a registered sex offender when she grows up!
only problem trunks is gay and has the hots for goten.
trunks would never willingly fuck any girl, so bra would have to rape him!
since trunks is a pacificist he wouldn't be able to fight back!
it will be a lot harder for bra to rape goten though.
vegeta would say that trunks was probly "asking for it!"
next videl should fuck her dad hercule and give birth to pan.
then pan can grow up to fuck hercule also! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 14:33 CST
Comment/Review:
That was...new. TrunksxBra, oh wow. I never would have thought. Good job though. |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always thought that Bra wouldn't mind having her Bro in bed... Guess, he's hot as hell ! So You got a good Idea by making this fic and you GOT TO DO A SEQUEL !!! FAST !!!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: MajinKai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 03:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good story! I like to see incest writers! Very nice , that's a rare pair to see... and I like it. |
Reviewed By: foxynyangel On: October 26, 2002 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i reallly loved it but there are not many trunks/bra fics like this and hope you can write another |
Reviewed By: KIMMI On: November 02, 2002 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK SO WHT HAPPENS NEXT?
KINDA KINKY...BUT I LIKED IT ANYWAY.................. |
Reviewed By: Blue Flame Tigress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first it was knda of gross and then its was really because Goten caught them |
Reviewed By: Akakay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic. It is so original, unlike the tons of vegeta/bulma. You should deffinatly make a sequal. |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
intresting fic i like wierd couples maybe you could do a squeal with what happens with Goten
Ja 'Ne |
