| "The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: T___T
Reviewed By: darkflame7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i know it's an old story but i just had to review its a great story i hope you do continue but if ya don't it's fine with me! so uhhhh.....yeah bye!
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Reviewed By: Zharaya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm crying now. please right more? *begs with watery chibi eyes* please? pretty please? |
Reviewed By: AngeloflightPa On: November 21, 2002 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until you up date soon |
Reviewed By: AngeloflightPd On: November 21, 2002 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like both stories you did of this; I am still waiting for the next chapters that are to come |
Reviewed By: Fabi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great. I've just read 'Yes Master, My Master' and then I looked for the sequal. Both fics are great.
I totally wanna know what will happen to Quatre. Will he be alright? Will he tell what happened to someone? Please I need to know what will happen. Put the next chapter up asap. |
Reviewed By: mimi On: November 03, 2002 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to finish this... o.o |
Reviewed By: Foxfur On: September 24, 2002 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for putting this up on Mediaminer. And I'm sorry that I never got back to you on fanfiction.net, but (and this isn't an excuse, it's the truth ^_~;;) I totally lost the address, forgot the title of the fic, and forgot what name you used on fanfiction.net. Pretty pathetic, huh?
Anyhow, this is a great contiuation of Yes Master, My Master. But I've already said that a long time ago, huh? I hope you continue it soon. Now that it's here, I'll be able to read as soon as you update... and I promise to give reviews. Unless you're sick of hearing from me....
Oh, before I go... I just wanted to mention that out of all the chapters I found only one semi-major mistake. Last paragraph, chapter 7. I can't remember the exact phasing, but something like; "strong eyes wrapped around his shoulders pulling him towards Duo". I'm not critisizing you, please don't think that.
Please write more!!! |
