"A Letter From The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Lilly On: February 07, 2003 20:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my gosh, after I read this I cried so hard! This is the sapiest and greatest fic! keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Vegeta On: May 05, 2002 22:52 CDT Comment/Review: that was really good (feel happy, i don't say that to alot of fics) Kami, you might be able to put some of those parts under a tear-jerker...almost
anyways, i think you should get a next chapter, or write some more fics, whitcher ever |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2002 21:25 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Actually..
I disagree. I don't think they should meet.
It would be a little awkward, and I think the way you left it was perfect.
Please don't do another.. I love your writing, I read ALL of "Unlikely Romance", so just leave it where it is. This is an adorable story, beautiful at that.
~Majin Niņa~ (penname ErieDragon) |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 07:39 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This was so sweet. Please do a chapter were they meet. Please. If you don't I still love this story anyways |
Reviewed By: Jewel On: March 15, 2002 03:09 CST Comment/Review: That was fantastic, so sweet and adorable. |
Reviewed By: Hetchi On: February 17, 2002 00:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Write more! I'd be really cool to see them meet! |
Reviewed By: kat On: January 13, 2002 18:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i thought it waz really sweet
and im lookin forward to furtha capterz |
Reviewed By: Jes On: December 31, 2001 14:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really loved your fan fiction!please write another chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2001 23:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was really good it had a original plot and everything i hope you write a third one but then again it would be kinda weird i don't know i u do write a third one i'll definatly read it no questions asked well if you decide to update e-mail me at mousey7891@hotmail.com well cya
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Daimyo no Tamashii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2001 19:51 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't even begin to say how wonderful this fic is. I have never rad a story as deep as this one. I salute you. |
Reviewed By: Ane S. Thesia On: August 29, 2001 14:30 CDT Comment/Review:
That was sooo sweet! I'm going to read your next chapter now... |
Reviewed By: Ane S. Thesia On: August 29, 2001 14:42 CDT Comment/Review:
Wow! That was very well written. I'd like to see more from ya! |
Reviewed By: Nick On: August 29, 2001 14:56 CDT Comment/Review:
Well, I thought it was good, but it was nothing at all like the true Vegeta. But still, it was very, very good! |
Reviewed By: NaCoBe On: August 29, 2001 16:15 CDT Comment/Review:
I liked it a lot. Please do a 3rd chapter. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Libra On: November 17, 2001 15:38 CST Comment/Review: I loved it! very touching. very creative! |