| "Dark Child" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: victorialincgmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 04:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!! just wish it could have been a little longer. but it is sooooo good
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Title: hey!
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well damn were's the rest?
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Reviewed By: Winged_Isis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 11:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooooooh! I so would have loved to see Vegeta in his costume! Isn't there any artwork done to this story? However, I really did enjoy reading your fic - to make it about vampires was just great! You have fully satisfied two of my major obsessions: 1.Vampires and 2.Vegeta(*gringrin*)! So, let's just face it: This fic is perfect! ^.^
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Reviewed By: reader On: July 09, 2003 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm enjoying it I hope you continue it as I'm not much for comments i'll just tell you this....PLEASE KEEP THIS GOING! |
Reviewed By: Catgirl-13 On: March 29, 2003 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a VERY original fic. I love the whole Vampire consept and how you've tied it in w/ the Saiya-jin race. It's very interesting; the way you wrote it pulled me in. I really liked the 'Saiya-jin' language you added in. It added a really cool effect. And the romance was just so sweet it could give someone tooth decay! I can't wait for another chapter. Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Kameya/Danessa On: December 30, 2002 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW HECKS YEA!!!!!!! i loved how u made saiyans and vampires 1 species! man ive been looking for vampish fic this is a good one keep it up!
ps will u do a trunks and pan or my character vampire fic like that?
KameyaCat@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: K. Sapphire On: March 24, 2003 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can believe that Vegeta would act like that. |
Reviewed By: strompf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best stories I have ever read. Very ROMANTIC. Wow! Your comparison between Vegeta and the vampires was really neat. I just loved this story. Fantastic job. |
Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
WHat!!! you must tell more |
Reviewed By: Salvia Tanima On: November 04, 2002 04:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... quite funny. I'm from Transilvania, and it was hillarious the way you described the villagers. LoL BTW I like all your DBZ stories |
Reviewed By: Amaris [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hun trust me you're not boring anyone |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is really good! And extremely original. Shoot I'm supposed to be off the net and I lost track of time. I haven't done that in a story since Darke Angelus's Back to School!!!! That's good!
Please, may I host your story on my webpage? It's http://committed.to/bttp Email me back....
Kahlan, who simply loves this story but has to continue it tomorrow. |
Reviewed By: glitterynile [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2002 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
i couldn't come up with a better idea myself, so Vegeta was a varpire, right? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 24, 2002 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Kami that was great!! Your descriptiions of B/V's costumes, the ball, the waltz, and the walk thru the garden on a moonlit night made it all seem like a fairytale and so romantic *sighs*. The lemon at the end was superb. Even Bulma's reaction when Veggie bit her was a realistic. I mean if your significant other (or anyone else for that matter) bit your neck you would be trying to get away from them real fast. Great one shot. This was well written with an entirely new way of getting them together. You should repost this on Halloween Day for more reviews. That's something that MMO is lacking in and thats people that review. On the other hand people here are more civil and you hardly ever see flames. Again, Kudos on an excellent fic. It was very entertaining :D.
suenami927@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 24, 2002 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love this!! It's been awhile but I remember reading this at your website last year. I'm glad to see you at MMO and that you've posted your fics here. I guess I have FFN's NC-17 stupidity to thank for that ^_^. The similarities between saiyans and vampires threw me for a loop, but the fact that these "vampires" are actually saiyans was ingenious. Now if you don't mind I'm gonna check out the rest. Great chapter :D. |
