| "A strange sort of love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Nekay [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Need more yaoi less hentai!! I loved it, but please more yaoi!! I like to see Ranman and Ryoga as both males making love please!! I loved it that they had children and hope to see them as a family. Oh you need conflict as well!! I think it would be fun to see Ryoga having his way with Ranman for once (male form)!!
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Reviewed By: 4478716 On: October 23, 2004 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
conflict, you NEED some conflict, any conflict!
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