"Judgement of the Eternal Dragon" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Seera_Stasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 11:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Not bad.... Really not bad at all. You have a few too many typos... but still. Can't wait for the next chapter.. oh do me a favor please... shove Shadow in there somewhere. Arigato gozaimasu.
Ja-ne.
~ Gabby |
Reviewed By: Belzelga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 16:42 CDT Comment/Review: One more thing: Have you seen how many visits your story has gotten?! Nearly 200 at the time of this review! I'll bet that means a lot of people want to know what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Belzelga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 16:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Great Idea for a story. I hope that you continue it. The 'Sonic the Hedgehog' characters seem to be much more prone to violence than normal; which in this case adds a neat little twist. I would like to see an eating contest between Goku and Sonic--that would be cool. It is my hope that the characters (or at least some of them) will become allies (but not necessarily friends) by the end of the story. |
Reviewed By: Final On: June 14, 2002 22:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it this fanfiction rocks by the way it's Master Emerald. |
Reviewed By: Ryu the Weredragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 21:47 CST Comment/Review: Nice work! PLEASE continue...I'm working on one that was inspired BOTH by your work AND By the work of another author...Please, continue on! |