| "Saritas passage" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: wabooc [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story line it's a little confusing but quite enjoyable. Don't stop writing i was really enjoying the story. :-) |
Reviewed By: Too lazy to sign in.... On: October 26, 2002 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Maybe people just don't like it that much.....I like it, I mean sometimes it's a little confusing but still it's going to be great. Do you use Micro. Word? It has spell check on it ya know? |
Reviewed By: Alia Lowe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story so far. It is distictly different in style from InuYasha, but very similar. I can see why you put it in this catagory. Overall, this is a very enjoyable story with a very original idea. The only grammar complain is the one paragraph in chapter three where every sentence started with "Sarita". A "She" might be more appropriate to avoid the repetitiveness. Otherwise, I like this fic and I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's well interesting, it could be better. There are a few little mistakes but over all it's great. Hope you write more soon! |
