| "Upside Down, Bouncing off the Ceiling" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: ok On: June 11, 2005 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was really looooooooong!But it was funny especially the part where ketak said just think of it as you are being let go,we are going in another direction.....etc. That was a hilarious story please write others like it.
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Reviewed By: kinging On: July 16, 2004 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad story. Needs more comedy
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