| "House With Contents" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story! vegeta and goku are such exhibitionist lol. write moree!!
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Definately got to praise you. Very nice story. Love the lemons ^_^ Very nice job.
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: February 20, 2003 07:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice Lemon! Keep writing Goku/Vegeta lemons! Those are my fave too! |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 12:11 CST
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Niiiiice lemon! I loved how Goku got strapped onto the bench. VERY big turn on! ^_~ That was my favorite part. Keep writing Goku/Vegeta lemons! Those are my fave too! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 15:08 CST
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OMG!!! That's got to be one of the best Bondage Lemons I've read in a long time. Please tell me there's more to cum{pun intended} That was really sneaky of Vegeta but I didn't hear Kakarott complaining. I bet that will be their favorite room, next to the kitchen of course.
I read a lot of fics, so if you update this fic could you e-mail and let me know. I want to read more.
Waiting......................... |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 14:40 CST
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Ohhhhhhh,Hmmmmmmmmm, I would say they need a place of their own soon. Very nice Lemon, I just love it when Vegeta and Kakarott please each other.
Moving on to chapter 2 if I can't stand the heat!
Waiting........................... |
Reviewed By: SoccerVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! *fans herself* That was fantastic! The lemon was VERY, VERY tasty! Excellent work all around! Hope to see more soon! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 18:00 CDT
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Very nice. Great lemon, those two just have no control. I bet it was a great show.
Waiting........... |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 06:10 CDT
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*blush* Weeeeeeell... Yesh. Um. Never heard the pomegranite thing before, tho how one would get enough out of a pomegranite to make a cake is beyond me. Eating the fruit on its own is difficult enough with all those seeds!
My only quibble is that Goku seems just a little too in control of himself - i.e. pausing to the Vegeta, um, "adjust" - for how crazed he was earlier. It didn't seem consistent.
And I could always ask that the sex be drawn out a little more, but that's a given, and besides, it's not over yet. >;D
Write more! |
