| "Strawberry Cheescake" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: swtcandiee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 14:59 CDT
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sorry for the repeat there ..
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Reviewed By: swtcandiee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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lol ..the ending was pretty funny..nine times, ehh? o.0 right where one of them said they think Ken's dead, I was thinking about South Park and how they're always saying "You killed Kenny!" ..hahaha
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Reviewed By: swtcandiee(not logged in) On: August 10, 2004 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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lol ..the ending was pretty funny..nine times, ehh? o.0
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Reviewed By: Blakkmollie On: October 14, 2003 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
first: I'm not flaming you! And I don't wanna kiss your ass and give you tens for everything the way it seems to be usually. Ever heard of "beta-reader" or "spellchecker"? Your stuff could be a whole lot better! It's not bad, it just needs improving. There's a lot of grammar and spelling errors that really distract from the story. (like "needing" instead of "kneading") fix them and this is not bad at all! ;-)
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Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 06:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O I have 2 stop reading NCI7 fic's. Its not heatley 4 a 14 year old 2 read this stuff......BUT UR STORIES R SOOOO DAMN GOOD THAT I CANT STOP READING THEM. 2 hell with it I'm going 2 keep reading them |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 14:24 CST
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i forgot to review this one when i read iot too... nine times... lol. o'.'o |
