| "It was sunny" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 06:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
where is the version of the story that is being updated? |
Reviewed By: HardCandy Vegeto On: October 29, 2002 08:52 CST
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hey guys... i'm no longer under HardCandyvegetto, it's Hard Candy Vegetto now.. yeah i know -_-'
but hey, i am updating and the story is under the same name. but this version won't get the update cause i got screwed by mediaminer... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Buu On: October 24, 2002 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story you've got here, keep it up. But I don't think Gohan would be scared of Vegita, more uncomfortable then scared. Hope to see more soon. |
Reviewed By: Gekko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 00:13 CDT
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Ahhhh, this is so neat! You really did a good job on this. |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: September 26, 2002 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my what a great story.. and the proofreader must have been such a bueatiful woman... lol. I hope other readers like my sisters work as much as i do and if any of you guys wnat to be jerks and say mean things just becuase your bitter and talentless and can't write half as good as hardcandyvegetto when she's drunk i'll find you and personally make you eat every word. after of course knoking out all your teeth and writtinf every word on them Love you smooches |
Reviewed By: LiL MysTic DraG0n [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is greatest stry of all!!!!!!! please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: September 25, 2002 16:31 CDT
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I hope I get some reviews.... ^_^ |
