| "Uninvited" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: No
Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P On: September 06, 2005 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're just about to end it when you quit.You crushed me.I think Im going to cry *sob*sob*.JERK *has a B.F.*
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Reviewed By: Cocostarr On: June 13, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read this story over and over. Please update!
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Reviewed By: .. On: March 07, 2004 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOO!! You have to update the story! Bra has to come to her senses. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Patrick11 On: January 08, 2004 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is good and keeps you reading which is the point. But are you ever going to finish the story.
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Reviewed By: goddessofflame On: July 08, 2003 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it and thought it was a very good read. The style was very original.Can't wait for the rest. |
Reviewed By: Little Pannie-Chan member from ff.net On: July 07, 2003 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't updated in a while... I forgot all abotu your fic... so i had to read it again... But I enjoyed doing that! Well, the previous chapter that you uploaded was being waited for! I'm glad you put almost as much T/P as G/B! My top fav. is T/P but G/B is my second... so I enjoyed this fic alot... I can't wait till the next chapter!!!
(PS: I got your e-mail for the fic (I'm Lite Umbreon@aol.com,) But I was going to read this on ff.net but right now... it's down for a sec.. I'll check again. I dont' even knwo why i told you... oh well. I guess I just wanted you to know! |
Reviewed By: Seremira On: July 05, 2003 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've followed this story on ff.net and loved it.
Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: foxfire On: March 29, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic rocks!!! please finish it. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 08:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to continue this fic ! I can't wait to see the next chapters :P Poor Goten *sniff* You got to continue your good work ! And is it possible that it was once on ff.net? |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi!!!!!!!!! i love this fic and can u pwease update please!! i love this fic |
Reviewed By: yaselle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really awesome, there isn't any other way to say it. I got hooked on this baby when it was posted on ff.net and when it got deleted 'cause of the nc-17 thing I had fear it would be the end so all I can said is that I'm glad you haven't totally deseapered. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura On: September 26, 2002 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Come on dude, dont leave me hangin. I was readin the chapters like crafty was and then it just stopped. Even Cliff hangers gotta end some how...either the guy that was hangin falls, or he get back up (in this case i wanna get back up and read some more) |
Reviewed By: Crafty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! You can't leave us hanging like that! There I was, happily clicking along, enjoying each chapter more than the previous one, and suddenly...no more chapters! Please update soon, I think my mental health may depend upon it. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura On: September 25, 2002 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up dude...am i the first one to review this here? shit...is there more to the story plz say there is more...u just cant leave ME hangin here...very very good story plz keep it up |
