| "Tenchi Muyo: The Clone Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: 4 Years later
Reviewed By: Shea S On: January 23, 2008 08:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
4 Years later I beesech you to finish this amazing story. And I ask for another part to the Jim/Aisha story, maybe dealing with his kids.... PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ecchi-Anbu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now correct me if I'm wrong, but let me get this strait. As it stands Tenchi, in this fic, will "have" to choose just one of the girls to marry? ...Not to sound like a know-it-all but with the Juraian Royal family and marraige works he could have ALL of them, in fact its INCOURAGED that he have more than one wife. So I don't honestly know how this story should work. On another note though I read the first few paragraphs and though of thiis, are you trying to write a fic where Tenchi WILL marry all but ONE of them? I'm lost and confused, this story doesn't amke sense... but its still written well with nogrammer or spelling problems.
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Title: Appropriate
Reviewed By: Terdwilicker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all the Tenchi Muyo fanfics, this one is my favorite. While Tenchi is a bit more angsty, it shows character growth he NEVER had in the anime. I consider this a good thing. I'm also pleased that while you went with the harem angle, you chose a rather unique way to approach it, showing real understanding of the needs and jealousy of the women in his household. That was a sensitive touch. I doubt the authors of this series and its spin-offs could have thought up this solution, or written it this well. I also liked that the girls issues affected their approach to their lovemaking styles, and their reactions to him. The confrontation with Asuka was kinda over the top, but something like that was necessary to provide a climax to the story.
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Title: More please
Reviewed By: Alaya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 03:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading your fic back when it was first on Greyarchive. I'm sorry to say that some chapters have been lost there. Which is why I ended up coming here to read the rest. It's easy to see how much you've improved since you started writing this fic and I know you're busy writing the other but I know there are lots of people, myself especially, who would LOVE to see new chapters for Clone Chronicles come out soon. Anyway keep up the great work and keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Priest (log in problems) On: December 24, 2005 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has been a long time but i finaly got around to checking this storie out again. i am glad to see it is back to where i last read it. i realy would like to see more of this one in the future. Ja-ne =(^_^)=
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Reviewed By: BlackJudgment [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Post next chappy plz!
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Title: To whom it may concern
Reviewed By: Safus On: September 28, 2005 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been a long time fan of Mr. E's for the past few years there has not been one day where I have not check all three of his stories for updates. To put it quite simply, I enjoy his works moreso than those of Tolkien, Alan F. Troop, and J.K. Rowling. For him to get published would be a simple task. He allows us to enjoy these works for free over the internet(though I would more than pride my self to be an avid collector of his books if he ever would get published.)Anyhoo, I've allowed to let myself get off topic, Mr. E. stories are massive, and probably a pain in the ass when it comes to editing, so you should give him a little credit when he decides that it would be best to work on one at a time. If you want to see the true art that he is capable of, you should go check out Lucky number 13. Unless it's only Tenchi fics that get you off. There are few authors as good as Mr. E, and it would be wise to show appreciation for all he's done for us. Maybe that's just my opinion though. Signing off, Safus
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Reviewed By: Ramiel On: April 10, 2005 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic, even if the concept is a little overdone. I don't have a problem with that though. What I do have a problem with is the way you leave so many errors in your writing, and although you give an explanation for it, that dosn't mean it wouldn't look a lot better if you just sat down for a few hours and went through it all. Take a little more pride in your work D:
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Reviewed By: Ultaraguyver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this and am glad somebody finally had slade killed in there story, but I was just wondering why can't BB go with raven to her home, I mean can't the Titans find some temporary members to fill.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: cartmicah3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one the best fics i have ever read your fics are what got me into fanfiction. About three years ago im cruising this new site i found and there there is this Outlaw star fic, the best outlaw star fic ever. and i was hooked to fanfics ever after. your Tenchi fic is also one of the best tenchi muyo fics ever so please keep up the writing dont give up. And if you do give up ill gut you with a spoon.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: murdock12 On: October 24, 2004 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one the best fics i have ever read your fics are what got me into fanfiction. About three years ago im cruising this new site i found and there there is this Outlaw star fic, the best outlaw star fic ever. and i was hooked to fanfics ever after. your Tenchi fic is also one of the best tenchi muyo fics ever so please keep up the writing dont give up. And if you do give up ill gut you with a spoon.
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Reviewed By: Ultaraguyver [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good plot Brilliant scenes I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see more
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEEEEEET MAMA JAMA! I've been trying to find this fic for the last three years in SOME form. I'd first read this on the TMFFA back before it went automated, and am so glad to see it on Mediaminer. Keep up the good work and, hey, don't sweat the revisions too much. I don't think I'll recognize this if you do :D
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Reviewed By: kofu On: September 05, 2004 03:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Looking forward to reading more
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Reviewed By: ukuk On: June 17, 2003 00:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read the parts on greyarchive and wonder when you will put out more chapters. |
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