| "A Fistful Of Omake" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: iWindoze On: December 24, 2002 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree with Joe T. This is not only a
refreshing change but also I think a necessary
one in the fanfic 'scene'! I've been a fan ever
since I first heard of the Bet, oddly enough I
heard of it via comments by Skysaber in a fic of
his-- I liked his stuff so much that I thought to
give your fics a chance and have never regretted
it.
That said, the whole Genma is one step beneath
Hitler bit has run its course as far as I'm
concerned and I'm glad to see you playing with
the concept of a redeemed Genma for a change.
I'd love to see you continue this as a extended
play or make a mini-series out of it. I'd like
to know more about that scar on Genma's face,
I'd like to see more interaction with Soun...How
does Kuno handle someone like your new Ranma?
WHat is Nodoka like in this universe, if Genma
even marries her, considering hoiw he may have
changed?
Other questions I'd love to know an answer to are
the fate of a certain perverted martial artist
master..I'm assuming that although both Soatomes
could easily deliver him an 'attitude adjustment'
Happi is still on the loose..Or did Happi find
himself another duperr..student to train along
with Soun. Say a certain son of a priest whose
father has otherworldly origins...? Or perhaps
old man Hino decided to go into a different
occupation? The possibilities are endless.... |
Reviewed By: ArchangelBloodraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very well done, Gregg. One day when I feel I can do the idea justice, I may try my hand at my own omake. I certainly have enough viable ideas. I am particularly impressed with "Hotaru 1/2" and believe it would make an excellent fic. Hotaru and Ranma are some of my favorite characters and they certainly a believable couple. Please continue all of your fics. I look forward to all of them.
Archangel Bloodraven |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 09:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I like this one. It would make for a great addition to a new labor or multi crossover of some kind. Your great at those, perhaps one with Ranma as a the main character though. Kind of like Mirrors Mulitplied or something. That could be a lot of fun. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: JokerD On: September 30, 2002 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting LOTR and Ranma cross. Dark but still written in a very believable way. Good character dissection of the cast, though Ukyo's as well as other char's acceptance seems a bit rushed. Hope it'll be continued. |
Reviewed By: blu saneda On: September 29, 2002 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Plain and Simple. I thought like always that it was Ranma who had did something stupid to find a cure or to slove his problems, but to have it not be him but Akane. The problem some people might have with this fic is the fact that some of the supporting characters know the importance of this battle and not to just go charging in. But poor Ranma isn't using his head to heed the warnings that are giving to him.
Did he not watch Mr. Tendo and Kuno get killed. He still wants to go in with his fist first. Now his mother has taken the death blow for him.
I do hope that you do finish this cause its right interesting to know if Ranma and crew are going to win this battle or not. |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 04:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I truely don't know what to say about this chapter. I'm glad you are expanding out in your writing like I said in another review, but to go this far...well Ranma's life is going to be destroyed. in the end everyone is going to die and Ranma will either die or be the last one standing after losing half his soul. Ryoga is dead, Soun, Kuno, his mother...and by the time this first fight ends Ukyo and shampoo will probably be the only one's left standing. Nabiki is on the verge of a nervous break down...
I like it and dislike it at the same time if that makes any sense, that's the best I give you I'm afraid. Sorry about that.
The new omake before this one were pretty good though and I got a kick out of that Nathan Brazil one had a lot of potential. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Tazol On: September 29, 2002 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this one, primarily because I've always been a fan of the Well World books, and like the character of Nathan Brazil.
The fact that Ranma isn't portrayed as a low grade moron in this fic was also a major plus.
Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Kind Fearless Leader On: September 28, 2002 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, Metro has died and been replaced with a Kapito. This omake was disgusting and nonsensical. How MANY places did this go wrong. Should I mention the internal implausibilities or go outside and mention the plausiblity problems relative to your source materials.
There's a lot that could be said, but I'm not going to waste my time here. This fic is a bash fic. A rather gratioutious bash fic.
Fearless Leader |
Reviewed By: Genryu On: September 28, 2002 15:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Didn't thought of precising, but I was talking about Omake 43 : 'The Tendo Bunch' |
Reviewed By: The Apprentice On: September 27, 2002 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly do hope to see more of Hotaru 1/2, and if you were to turn it into a full-fledged story (instead of just being part of A Fistful of Omake) I would be quite pleased.
No instant-powerups (but access to a great training facility), and the mix-up at Lunar Central on whether or not Ranma is a reincarnation of a person from the Silver Millenium added to both the creativity and enjoyment factor.
I wonder how Haruka will react when Michiru tells her about (in her opinion) Minako's comments during their telephone conversation. Not to mention Ranma and Hotaru! |
Reviewed By: blu saneda On: September 26, 2002 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy your stories cause they are a trip. I hope you finish that Hotaru 1/2 want to know what happens. |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to one of your top five of all the omake you've done so far. I would love to see this turned into a regular fic, if I had the time I'd do it myself, but I've got 8 stories going right now so I'm just too busy.
Keep up the excelent work, I'm going to check back on this every now and then to see if you have updated it or not.
^_^ |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey cool, I noticed you were starting to post your stuff to MediaMiner, good to see your still around. Keep up the great work, I want to see all your works here
^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lufio On: March 11, 2003 17:26 CST
Comment/Review:
You used Wedding Peach? You used Wedding Peach?!? Bwah haha haha haha haha haha hah ha! Fist of the North Star martial arts in Wedding Peach?!? Bwah haha haha haha haha hah ha! |
Reviewed By: Genryu On: September 28, 2002 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you've once again proved Toltiir's point :
"Restraint? What's that? Sounds uncomfortable..."
Joke asides, this is a very good omake in my book. Could easily be expanded, and I hope it will be one day.
^^ |
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