| "A Fistful Of Omake" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: BIG BOY FROM MICHIGAN [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 15:29 CST
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Some of the other people that have read your fic might disagree but you should write one more fic that asks what if Ranma was raised by Arthur Fonzarelli a.k.a. "The Fonz"?I think that would be worthwhile if it is done right.
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Reviewed By: BIG BLOCK On: August 03, 2005 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a good writer.I like how you wrote the Looney Tunes story.I could not stop laughing.If you could write some more fics that use Looney Tunes I would appreciate it.
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Reviewed By: Shad the not-so-magic dragon On: July 28, 2003 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nabiki blinked. "You hogtied her and gagged her in her own gi. Exactly how is that 'promise'?"
"She has nowhere go but up, yes?"
Absolutely priceless. Please excuse the lack of indepth review while the reviewer has a giggling fit or three. Full marks.
Glad to see you're still in action, keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Because of you, I've seen Paris!"
Good stuff as usual.
Can we have more of the (Mis) adventures of Grey, please? |
Reviewed By: Brian Drozd On: July 24, 2003 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Shampoo's New Plan was wonderful except for one thing. It just left everything kinda hanging at the end there with no sense of closure. Personally, I think it would be interesting if, in the end, Ranma was the only one of the regular Ranma cast who wasn't in a multiple marriage - either he's alone or married to just one person. All the fiancees and rivals wind up with mutliple wives / husbands / co-spouces. |
Reviewed By: Oruncrest On: April 26, 2003 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hunh! I guess Grey's flunked this labor too.
Given that I was apparently one of the five or so people who liked your Kestrel/Sailormoon Omake (even though I didn't get a chance to C&C before it was taken off of fanfiction.net (heck, it's not even up here. At least put it up here! Think of all your fans who didn't get to see it before the whiners on ffn set your ears on fire)), it should come as no surprise that I liked this omake as well. The ending, however came as a complete surprise to me, as I'd assumed (yeah, I know that line about assuming things) that for once Grey(lle) would catch a berak and actually be able to succeed in one of these tasks, only to have it bitch-slapped into my head (ouch) that Our Hero cannot complete one of these Labors on a Bet. Even if he did find a boyfriend for Setsuna, she'd try to kill him.
As for why Pluto seems to look so relieved, you have to remember that she's stayed at the Gates since before the fall of the Silver Millenium. Indeed, in the Manga, Pluto only got to have a life after she died and NQ Serenity resurrected her.
Well after Crystal Tokyo was founded.
Not even Grey could enjoy that type of life.
Even he would be happy to die. |
Reviewed By: C. Rose On: April 25, 2003 00:07 CDT
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Your Labors have always been your best work and hope, really hope that you continue this one. I've always gotten a kick out of the odd situation you come up with in these things.
:) |
Reviewed By: Essai On: April 23, 2003 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only have one problem with this particular omake (52) and that is that it is inconsistent.
At the start of the introductions to the senshi he mentions something to Luna about "How's Artemis?" and also there is mention of Minako being at the senshi gatherring. Then both Venus and her advisor are suddenly not part of the group yet and no one has any clue who they are. |
Reviewed By: Shad the not-so-magic dragon On: April 03, 2003 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....
*STARES* at the punchline.
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AAAAIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
*runs of screaming in pain from the pun*
You, my man, are EVIL and I bow before thee. |
Reviewed By: Taktuk On: March 13, 2003 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good. An appetizer only, but pleasure it did bring. I salute you. Well, I would if this were something other than a virtual environment. Thanks for not using the obvious ending. |
Reviewed By: This is so cool! On: March 11, 2003 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I really like this one, though Wedding Peach was an unexpected surprise. I wonder how He would fare against the DBZ crowd? Now that would be an interesting cross, HSK against Super Ki
:) |
Reviewed By: SKyfox On: March 27, 2003 07:08 CST
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MacGuyver? Oh ow ow ow.... that was a painful pun..... |
Reviewed By: Shad the Not-So-Magic Dragon On: January 06, 2003 03:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here we have Soun forgetting the first rule of the ancient game of Mock-The-Stupid-Foreigner: Make sure he doesn't speak your language first. Assumptions and all that.
Nicely done. The only point of contention I'd have is that Nabs isn't the type to throw away something that contains information that might be useful. Akane, though, would probably toss it away with an "And good riddance to foreign perverts"... But ah well. Can't bash tomboys every single story or it'd get old.
Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: January 04, 2003 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to add to the other favorable reviews of this story. It is nice to see Gemma as the changed person, and how this ripple effects everything else. A kind of "better father than Gemma" where Gemma is the better father. This stands well on its own or could be continued. There certainly would be much to explore - Nadoka, Happosai, the Amazons, the Tendos, the senshi would all be fertile ground. Does Ranma still have 'foot in mouth', and how does he relate to women? From his match with Akanne, at least he seems to have some respect. |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 23:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad, not bad. I'm not a big fan of magnum Pi but it could certainly make for a pretty gritty crossover.
:) |
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