Reviewed By: Kisaki Juudai Iyamino On: February 24, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The grammar and spelling is in desperate need of a beta-reader. The little miniseries at the end was great, BTW. However, Andrew seemed to change his mind too quickly about Serena having a relationship. I know that brothers get protective of their sisters but he can't just change his mind overnight and have it be alright. BTW... WRITE MORE!!! |
