| "Magic Knight Rayearth: Medieval Mystery Series" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: *** On: April 30, 2004 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, you have quite a few grammar mistakes, but the storyline is very interesting. Also, I noticed that you switched some of the characters. Satoru is the oldest Shidou brother and Kakeru is the youngest. Make sure you do some more research next time and good luck with the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 21:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wondeful retelling of the story. Even if you DID compress it, which made it all the more. . . How shall we say?- quick paced? Yeah. That sounds right. |
Reviewed By: Misao-chan On: July 29, 2003 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was great ^___^!!! The best I ever seen for Rayearth ^~; I just love your story hope you write more ^.^!!!!
Misao |
Reviewed By: GrayWolf On: July 10, 2003 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not good on Comments but, I'd have to it's really good. Whats Really cool is the characters Personalities are lind up prity well. And to get to the point, I liked it so much I coulden't stop reading tell I got to the end.^-^ |
Reviewed By: GrayWolf On: July 10, 2003 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not good on but I'd have to it's really good. Whats Really cool is the characters Personalities are lind up prity well. And to get to the point, I liked it so much I coulden't stop reading tell I got to the end.^-^ |
Reviewed By: Shewolf On: January 23, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aboslutlt wonderful! I had started reading this on another page and found it here this is so great ! |
