| "REPRISAL UNBOUND" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Title: so funny
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so funny as far as im readding it! expetialy the part with the needle and goku! that made me crak up like heck for 10 minutes!
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: June 05, 2005 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Bout damn time! I have been waiting so patiently for this fic to be updated. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! Can't wait for the next update, poor Geta & Bulma. Please don't keep us waiting too long.
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: September 11, 2004 09:42 CDT
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Good chapter, though very short. Hope to see an update soon ^_^
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Title: Punk Bitch Zakoryu
Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you haven't abandoned this fic, you had me worried for a while. I'm dying for the next chap. I have no problem waiting for the next one, quality is better than quantity and haste, just don't leave us hanging too long. As for Zakass. Ignore the ignorant prick he's not the one you're writing for anyway. I personally enjoy a little smut with my NC17 rating. That's why there are ratings, asshole! I'm also tired of critics who don't write. I'm a pretty good writer (but I don't write fics) so I enjoy diversity and a decent plot. I'd love to see what works of art you've written Zak, everyone's entitled to their own opinion but I'm curious if yours holds any credence. If you don't like the thought of DBZ characters getting laid, then hit the kiddie section or go back to "skool" and learn to spell. Do you have a problem with homos or hobos? Or are you simply confused with your own sexuality? Ya might wanna look into that. Otherwise, leave us consenting adults to our own devices. Sorry for wastin all this space but I'm feelin quite the bitch tonight and wanted to vent. As always keep up the good work and thanx for updating, however small the chapter!
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Title: Gay Ass
Reviewed By: Zakoryu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 17:24 CDT
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What the fuck are you writing. I mean why are you making porn out of Dragon Ball Z you fucking homie. I think Dragonball Z is cool but if you like it to then I suggest that you stop making porn out of it you homosexual bitch. Please write to me back you hobo fucker. My profile name is zakoryu. FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: July 04, 2004 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so sad! Vegeta thinking it's all his fault... I'm really looking forward to how this story will end. But you DO have to post more often! It would be such a torture if you would post only once in 6 months =(
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Toad On: July 03, 2004 14:22 CDT
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I've been waiting a long time for you to update this. Sorry your equipment f@#ked up, but I'm glad you didn't abandon this all together. Great cliffhanger, but you suck. Please update soon I am REALLY dying to know the outcome now!
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Title: Repraisal Unbound
Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastick story. Karma always comes back to bite you doesn't it? It was a little slow in places but is really beginning to pick up. I really want to find out what happens. Please update.
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Reviewed By: Hunny On: February 03, 2004 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please God UPDATE. I know you've got your own life to live but PLEEEEEEEZ. I love the angst and pain in Vegeta,(and yes I'm slightly sick in the head)and he's always best at the bad ass role. Not taht I don't love the tender side too I'm dying to know what he'll do about this situation. And Bulma, OOOOOHH Please Update. Thank You
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Title: saiyajin_supremacy@yahoo.co.uk
Reviewed By: Nasiya( forgot my password) On: December 14, 2003 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better, although this chapter left me kinid of hopeless. It s really totally original, which is one of the many aspects I admire this story for. Anyhow, I have no idea how this tragedy could turn out to have a happy ending. I hope you ll update soon, this long breakes in between the chapters are slowly driving me insane!!!
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Title: vejita_sei@yahoo.ie
Reviewed By: Neon-Mercury On: December 14, 2003 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really happy ou updated, but this chapter left me so utterly hopeless...I mean, who of the remaining z group should be able to finid out the truth???It seems like Vegeta's and his family's downfall couldn't be stopped. I just hope it somehow will, since your very well done character descriptions and plot made me admire and love your characters even more. ´Therefor I just hope there won't be a tragic ending to this. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: December 14, 2003 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting better and better. But you need to update more often, cause I'm going crazy waiting 2 months for a chapter!
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: Nasiya-not logged in On: October 07, 2003 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, so Vegeta wants Goku to kill him to face hell as the only punishment he finds to be proper? Will Goku see through Vegeta s behaviour? I really wanna know and hope they will figure out the true cause for the Saiyan No Ouji s behaviour. Please don t take that much time for updating again, I truely missed that story and am very glad you re back!
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Title: Just a little note...
Reviewed By: Pi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 08:05 CDT
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Well... I just passed by and thought: Hey, why don't you look what Imajineer is doing all the time. ^^ Oh, and I also just wanted to say that's september.. you know, s-e-p-t-e-m-b-e-r! *lol* Ah, can't wait for the next chapter, that's all.
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Reviewed By: love-princess On: August 09, 2003 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so good. The styly of writing is pretty interesting and I enjoyed it very much. The spelling and grammar were almost perfect and it was so easy to understand because the were verylittle mistakes. It was very creative and original and I really think it was brilliant. Overall this story is exceptional. Just write more. I can't wait until the next chapter.
lots of love from
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