| "REPRISAL UNBOUND" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: July 17, 2003 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me you're kidding... I can't wait until september !! That's wayyyy too long ! I wanna know what'll happen in the next chapter !
*sigh* The only thing for me to do now is wait... a loooong time. Alright, I'll stop whining now. Just hurry up, it's a great story =) |
Reviewed By: Pi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha... you want to kill me, right? SEPTEMBER?????????????? Well, good joke... Ok, I know, I should be the last to say that since I was late myself.
Whatever, there are no great surprises for me in this chapter, except for the twins. Your story is SO amazing and heart touching that I never got it, that Bulma could be pregnant. But I thought Vegeta would go mad and turn into Super-Saiyan or something like that and it's just the next shock in my list. I'm really sorry for Bulma! That's real hell.. I'm just exhaustend and speechless now... Damn, you'r good, you know that? ^__^ I need some fresh air now.. *totally shocked* |
Reviewed By: Pi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry for being SO DAMN LATE!! I had just much to do... I'm really Sorry!!! Oh, and I don't really know where to review... Hard disicion ^^° !
Well.. um, I guess first I should say, that the scene with Yamcha and his "Illusion of Bulma" was really cute. I wanted more to say about that, but.. good god.. I love Vegeta and I adore Bulma/Vegeta, you know?! I guess you do. So.. good god, just what did my handsome and beloved Vegeta do?! I know it isn't really his fault, but damn, that was.. hell!!! Hell for Bulma and hell for me to read it.
"He was completely unreachable." Yeah, it's just like completely black darkness is surrounding him, that's so sad.
God, I hope that nightmare will end soon and Bulma is ok. |
Reviewed By: Nasiya On: July 07, 2003 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You aren t serious about not updating till September, are you? This is such a brilliant story, it would be a pity to see it abandoned for such a long time.
Poor Vegeta, what s going to happen, will the z team figure out what caused his behaviour or are they going to kill him for it?And what about his relationship to Bulma, I guess it might get ok again due to the fact that she realised that her tormentor wasn t her Vegeta?
I need more of this;-) |
Reviewed By: Nasiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first saw this on ff.net and you got me hooked, your style is very good, as well as the plot, I can t wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what's going to happen in the next chapter...
I hope Vegeta comes to his senses soon, although the damage has already been done. Please update soon and don't keep us waiting TOO long. Nice chapter. |
Reviewed By: Celine On: June 26, 2003 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's still a great story =) Please update soon !! |
Reviewed By: Liyah On: May 13, 2003 03:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it better when you write about Vegeta, Bulma etc. So, I hope you'll write about them in your next chapter. Nonetheless this chapter was good. Can't wait to read the next one :-) |
Reviewed By: Snazzy On: April 05, 2003 06:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter again. I wanna read more!!! |
Reviewed By: Snazzy On: April 02, 2003 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, I loved it. I really like your story, it's not an original story, I mean, other people have written stories like when someone of Vegeta's past is out for revenge, but it's written very well. I like your story the best of the ones I've read so far. Which are a lot ;-)
So please keep on writing, you're doing a great job! |
Reviewed By: sk8erboi On: March 15, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 15, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah...let the lemons and violence commense. *lol* I really like your story, and glad to see you updating. |
Reviewed By: Loulou On: March 15, 2003 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like where this is going. Please continue soon... |
Reviewed By: Snazzy On: March 16, 2003 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah yes, really nice ;) Loved it as usual. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: misty On: February 24, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i don't give 10's, cuz im just that picky, but ur fic is the only one that i check for updates regularly, so please keep writing, it better than i had expected it to be, but it is kinda dragging on, but great. |
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