| "Neon Genesis Wing" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: DrakeDragon1 On: December 08, 2004 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, i like how this story is going. please keep writeing it I want to see where it goes.
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Reviewed By: Brax On: October 13, 2003 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shinji being pit into Wing Zero, then amped up with the ZERO system? As Stone Cold Steve Austin would say, "Gimme a hell yah!" Shinji would open a can of whoop -ass on Gendo, get in Asuka's face...and not back down, but kick the crap out of her! By the way, update this story man!
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Reviewed By: NeoZeratul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 05:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"What would happen if you put Shinji in Wing Zero?" Do we really want to ponder the immense ramifications of that? I could only imagine what the Zero System would do to his mind. All his hatreds would surface, perverted by the system. He'd probably destroy everything incluing the GeoFront, Terminal Dogma... etc. It'd make an interesting "What If" fanfic though!
I'm glad this installment finally came out. I've been waiting for this chapter. When is the next one due? Soon I hope. Sorry about the virus though... but hey, stuff happens... trust me I know. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: LightPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 07:53 CDT
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This is a very good fic, I hope you continue soon. |
Reviewed By: ????? On: May 03, 2002 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Author's Notes: This was supposed to be one really long chapter but it got too large for my liking so I cut it in half. Expect the next half in the next 5-6 days.
What happened? |
Reviewed By: NeoZeratul On: March 12, 2002 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, let it be known that I am very skeptical when it comes to crossover pieces, but this one is very well done and just happens to include two of my favorate animes (so I may be slightly biased ^_^ ) The characters are true to their originals, the events are believeable (well all except the crossover but hey its a hard thing to do), and it is very enjoyable to read. Looking forward to the next chapter. Domo Arigato ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lillith On: October 05, 2001 09:11 CDT
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all right!! dis is cool fiction, keep on writing ^^ or else... come to think of it... i don't know what I'll do |
