| "Innocent Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Moonie On: January 01, 2003 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is very good...plz try and finish it....ne wayz the reason i gave a 2 on the originality is cause its sorta like romeo and juliet....but overall its good. |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 24, 2002 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
It is sad that the never found out what really happened because i think that they should have been together because it just would have fit in the story. I am not saying that it is a bad story in fact it is pretty good. I just don't like the ending. Well g2g Eo |
