| "Trapped" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Trapped
Reviewed By: Ryoga-chan wolfgirl On: June 20, 2006 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cute I loved it.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Annonamous On: April 11, 2006 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
First off. I truly believe Nodoka wouldn't disown Ranma if he was stuck as a girl. Ranma wouldn't give up and go to Ukyou. He'd take off and look for a cure. Was there any point to this story. If your planing on continuing actually make the senshi have a point. You didn't need to crossover if this is complete. Akane wouldn't seal ranma's curse. through it all she loves him alot. And Yah FORMATING PROBLEMS. Space between paragraphs are helpful. Lots of grammatical mistakes. Why change the name or die Ukyou's hair it had nothing to do with the story.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Annonamous On: April 11, 2006 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
First off. I truly believe Nodoka wouldn't disown Ranma if he was stuck as a girl. Ranma wouldn't give up and go to Ukyou. He'd take off and look for a cure. Was there any point to this story. If your planing on continuing actually make the senshi have a point. You didn't need to crossover if this is complete. Akane wouldn't seal ranma's curse. through it all she loves him alot. And Yah FORMATING PROBLEMS. Space between paragraphs are helpful. Lots of grammatical mistakes. Why change the name or die Ukyou's hair it had nothing to do with the story.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: PolkaDot Arbyfish On: August 14, 2004 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
People tend to dislike the renaming deal, though i guess if they area past names it is okay. I think you made the story come together too quickly, if you rewrite it try prolonging the remembering.
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Reviewed By: Ranchan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, I can find 3 bad things in this story first 1.Format! it isnt that hard to do. 2.you are switching the names all the time reffering ranma as both Ran and Sol and ukyo as star and kagome or is it the other way around? stick to one. very confusing. 3.why change Ukyos hair color to purple? when it didnt serve any purpose in the story? other than that the story was an ok read.
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Title: Uh..eh..um...
Reviewed By: Ranko-chan On: September 19, 2003 12:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um...how do you say this...ugh...FORMATTING!
Ahem. Now with that out of the way...I'd like to say that I luv Ranma-chan fics (personally, I believe that Ranma really is a girl who turns into a boy ^_^) so other than the formatting bit, it's fairly good! |
Reviewed By: jetfowl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please fix your spelling, grammer, and format... This looks to be an interesting story, but since I had an incredibly hard time trying to read it, I gave up halfway through the story. |
Reviewed By: Cyde On: February 23, 2003 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of kami-sama, PLEASE format it! This would bea lot better plot if it were put into the form of a story about 400-500% longer. Ranma-gets-stuck-in-his-girl-form-and-becomes-a-sailor-senshi fics NEVER work as oneshots. I'll consider re-writing this in a multi-chapter format and with your permission, I may post it.
I like the idea (Unlike some, I don't get tired of these 'cliche`d' ranma/sailor moon crossover ideas. Something about Ranma becoming a new senshi just... does it for me. |
Reviewed By: chichi_90504 On: December 06, 2002 13:52 CST
Comment/Review:
this is one messed up story |
Reviewed By: MadPsyence On: September 29, 2002 03:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ack! Formatting! It needs formatting...and paragraphs..and yeah... formatting. |
Reviewed By: Kodachi On: September 26, 2002 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off... FORMATING!!! Get some.. quickly. Secondly, I personaly dont like fics where Ranma is stuck in his cursed form without any kind of explanation on how it happened and just to further the plot. Its also kind of a cliche in sailor moon crossovers for him to be a scout when he does get stuck. |
Reviewed By: JasonC On: September 25, 2002 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the fic a lot but will Ranma get revenge against the Nermians. Especially Akane, Genma and Nodoka? I like Nodoka's character but she needs to be put down for that. Although I am hopeing that she does redeem herself to Ranma. More chapters soon. |
