| "Outlaw Star: Growing Pains" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great.
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Reviewed By: Alpha Tango-Morita On: September 14, 2004 01:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics i have ever read, i would like to thank the writer to a high degree. You have great talent, i look forward to reading other works by you and any future stories you write, please keep writing you are doing a tremendous job!!!! and ingnore those stupid any STUPID Shipa Flamers, they couldn't tell a good story if it came and bit the in the butt.
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 14:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, it's been awhile. I really hope you can continue to update rapidly. You take it easy dude and keep on going. Never give up dude, we hentai's are never alone! ~Toby
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Reviewed By: Cheese Ninja On: November 23, 2003 06:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave it 9s, because it's great, but there's is always room for improvement, or so I like to believe. If you want to finish the series, the ending is at greyarchive.org, a ongoing collection of erotic writings, and an overall great site, under older anime stories. As the story goes on, there's less and less sex, but the story remains very good.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: zzzzzzzzzzzz [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 16:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic!!!Uber 1337!!!!!
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Reviewed By: UNKNOWN On: July 16, 2003 13:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always loved this story and never finished reading it at ff.net since they had to delete all of these kinds of stories which pissed me and alot of other people off. What I remember was that this was a series and wish that you would post the rest of the story on this site or tell everybody where we could find it posted completely. Really wish that you would post it in this site though since alot of people love it as much as I do. |
Reviewed By: Phoenix405 On: July 09, 2003 04:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first Fic I read from Mr. E and, from what I've read so far, it's the best. Though it looks like only the first chapter is on here right now... strange. However, the story is AMAZING and the sex is awesome too. ;) Hope either the rest of the story gets put up or me only seeing the first chapter is just a bug. :P
Keep up the great work!!! |
Reviewed By: stealtharwing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stealth: I'm actually doing a review without any of my characters or my girlfriend. Well, could you turn this into a series? I think that it would make a pretty descent multi-chap. fic. |
Reviewed By: Liquid Snake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 14:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After those idiots at Fanfiction.net banned NC-17 stories, I never thought I would see this story again. I loved reading it but I never saw the end. Please post the rest of it as soon as possible. |
Reviewed By: riye On: December 31, 2002 11:00 EST
Comment/Review:
please add in the rest of the story quickly |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 20:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the few Lemons out there that has a really good back story in it. loved the pairings done here but with me being a Tenchi Muyo fan you can guess whay I like Gene to be with Mel and Suzuka ! The only thing was a not a kick ass of an ending as it could have been, and I wished that Leila would have gottebn with Jim and Aisha eventually but you didn;t say anything about that. Hey Will Genes daughters bag Jim's son?????
Great way toi continue the Business, and sequel maybe?!?!?!?
dennisud
P.S.- Bing fan of Suzuka, Melfina, and Aisha liked what you did for them here! Though Mel was way OOC! |
Reviewed By: Logan kale [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i always loved this story. shame fanfiction net had to go so amazingly stupid and delete all the nc-17 this fic is so unbelievably awesome. i am a big jim ashia fan, and this fic is so incredibly awesome. lol well i think i will stop before i kiss off any semblence of pride. awesome awesome fic man. |
Reviewed By: indigo kitten On: December 13, 2002 13:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your obviously a fanatasic writer(hope you know that)and I'm glad, no, appericative that you took a chance writing a fic about the often forgotten characters. you know the characters very well, and was able to achieve the perfect lemon that was believable and delicious. keep up the good work, and thanx for writing about my favorite character... Aisha |
Reviewed By: Stranger On: November 27, 2002 14:39 EST
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I read the story on FF.net but the sonofabitchs took out all of the NC-17 storys out. And now its here! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: les miserables On: October 22, 2002 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic do some more aisha lemons pleeeeeeeease! |
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