| "Outlaw Star: Growing Pains" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: artistdude3838 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good I must admit that I liked it becuse of the style of writering but i was reading this i think one year ago and i liked it then but i didnt join the site for personl resons, but back tot he topic very good i did give you a 10 on creativity becuse it is a fan fic and it's not an orignal cast a little hypocritcal i know becuse i love fan fic but still thats just the way i am. over all keep up the great work dude!
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Reviewed By: Air Squid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 23:50 EDT
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Wow. I've read a lot of epic fanfiction...but an epic lemon? I though it was absolutely brilliant. All I can say, is that the story was intense. *Very* intense, and not just because of the sex. Good plot and nice characterization.
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Reviewed By: Air Squid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I've read a lot of epic fanfiction...but an epic lemon? I though it was absolutely brilliant. All I can say, is that the story was intense. *Very* intense, and not just because of the sex. Good plot and nice characterization.
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 13:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say it wow! I've never read a story so engrossing or so into the OutLaw Star universe. The sex was good too!
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Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 10:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That'll do author... that'll do
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Title: Editor-In-Training
Reviewed By: Vrag On: November 03, 2004 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Outlaw Star lemon i've ever read. Ever. It had all the best elements of a good lemon: Realistic or nearly realistic character matchings, a plot, good "action scenes", a plot, er.... A plot. I liked the plot. And i like the changes that you made, you had an explanation. For this, Vrag gives the (little known, less cared about) Vrag seal of Lemony Approval.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 9 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 8 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 7 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 6 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 5 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 11:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 4 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 11:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 11:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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