| "Outlaw Star: Growing Pains" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: I found you!
Reviewed By: Awakisu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2011 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm not giving a formal rating or anything like that, but I did feel the need to leave this little message to let you know how much I loved your fanfic. I read it years ago (possibly on ff.net before it transitioned) and it had been on my mind ever since I completed it. Sadly I changed computers and lost bookmarks (plus I completely forgot the title) so I could no longer find this story, no matter how hard I searched. Then last week I decided to try searching again, except using the year I remembered reading your fanfic. I got lucky (google really is my best friend) and to my surprise here the story was on MediaMiner (which I visit quite often actually haha). Anyhow, I re-read the fanfic and I still love it just as much. It's probably not what you consider your best work, or the one piece you love, and it's probably not 100% technically sound; but honestly I don't care one bit. I've always found something raw and oddly resonant of humanity lurking just beneath the surface of this fanfic, and even if it doesn't seem award winning to hordes of people, I enjoyed every bit of it--flaws and all. There is something simple and effortless and elegant about this fanfic; and I love it. I sincerely hope I'm not the only one to see it. |
Reviewed By: Meowch [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2010 19:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cool, Jim and Aisha are my favorite couple on Outlaw Star. (JAR = Jim Aisha Romance) Though I think the Ctarl immortality is a racial trait shared by the whole species. The ending wrapped it up nicely.
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Reviewed By: Goven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh hawt damn! Awesome story that I had to read again. Haha. Sex Scenes were pretty damn good along with the plot of the story. The ending was pretty damn good as well. Be awesome if the story could continue on from there but either way it was pretty damn awesome.
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Reviewed By: Someoneelse On: June 12, 2006 04:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I haven't read this story since it was on FF.net. Still just as good as I remember. I really hope that you write a sequal to it on day, it really is your best story.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 19:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I've read the entire thing about 8 times and I just enjoy it more each time. I still wish a sequel could be made, even though I know it would'nt work wright.
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Reviewed By: 5/4 On: August 18, 2005 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude... i spent the last 9 hours reading that fanfic, and it was fucking awesome, not just the sex scenes, the whole story, when jim was in prison, the prison break, and especially the ending, aisha was always my favorite OS charecter, but i must ask... were you in comntact with the OS developement staff?
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Reviewed By: artistdude3838 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good I must admit that I liked it becuse of the style of writering but i was reading this i think one year ago and i liked it then but i didnt join the site for personl resons, but back tot he topic very good i did give you a 10 on creativity becuse it is a fan fic and it's not an orignal cast a little hypocritcal i know becuse i love fan fic but still thats just the way i am. over all keep up the great work dude!
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Reviewed By: Air Squid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 23:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. I've read a lot of epic fanfiction...but an epic lemon? I though it was absolutely brilliant. All I can say, is that the story was intense. *Very* intense, and not just because of the sex. Good plot and nice characterization.
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Reviewed By: Air Squid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I've read a lot of epic fanfiction...but an epic lemon? I though it was absolutely brilliant. All I can say, is that the story was intense. *Very* intense, and not just because of the sex. Good plot and nice characterization.
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 13:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say it wow! I've never read a story so engrossing or so into the OutLaw Star universe. The sex was good too!
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Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 10:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That'll do author... that'll do
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Title: Editor-In-Training
Reviewed By: Vrag On: November 03, 2004 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Outlaw Star lemon i've ever read. Ever. It had all the best elements of a good lemon: Realistic or nearly realistic character matchings, a plot, good "action scenes", a plot, er.... A plot. I liked the plot. And i like the changes that you made, you had an explanation. For this, Vrag gives the (little known, less cared about) Vrag seal of Lemony Approval.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 9 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 8 it was great.
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