| "Harry Potter and the Summer Vacation with the Perfect Soldier" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: salllzy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2010 10:56 CDT
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update soon please it has been to long must know what happens next
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Title: PPPPLLLEEAASSEEE!!!!
Reviewed By: Fluffy-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive really loved this fic its what got me into gundamwing, so pppppppppppppllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeee write more i just love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: articuno13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 13:22 CDT
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*laughs* 'the dark lord can't have sugar?! ooh he has the same thing I have!' *looks pleadingly at Wufei* "Can I borrow your Katana?" Wuman "why?" "I can't have that blumbering-idiot-sugar-high-selfproclaimed-dark-lord have alll the fun! I want to slash his head off and save Duo the trouble!" pouts when Wufei shakes his head. "Awww your no fun!" 'well this is good on to chapter two! oh and i need to figure out how i'm gonna get Wuman to give me his kata for a few hours...'
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Reviewed By: The Wyrd Sister [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 23:05 CST
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Voldie's not gonna know what hit him. WONDERFUL! *jumps up and down with glee*
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Reviewed By: Chailyn On: August 30, 2005 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Other than the fact that it is most deffinately NOT completed--which made me mad--it's very good. You tend to use the wrong tense of a word or misspell character names, but its generally very good.
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Title: loved it!
Reviewed By: Wild Melody [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 22:48 CDT
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i LOVED it!! i am hoping you update this soon! i just finished hp & the 4 guardians before reading this one and absolutely LOVED it! i can't wait until you update again.
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Title: HI!!!!! ((That was K-chan, I swear!!))
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 03:48 CST
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(You know, she's either going to think we're insane or she's going to laugh her ass off.) [Let's hope it's the latter.... Though... the former wouldn't be SO bad, we ARE insane...] (Speak for youself, I'm just a fangirl.) [which = insanity.] (I didn't just admit that, I didn't just admit that, I didn't just admit that....) [Well you at least you spell guys you likes' names right.] (That doesn't sound gramatically correct.) [Who cares.] (*sorely tempted to quote Jack Sparrow*) [We have reached a special place...] (AAH!! We haven't said anything review-worthy!!) [Okay, how 'bout... Please write more. I wanna find out what happens next. And I wanna see Voldy get his ass kicked by Deathscythe.] (On another review {wow} note, that we already mentioned the "please write more" part, so it's an official review.) [But now we're giving you a good REASON to write more.] (Yes. Here it is: WE'LL BE BACK.) [No, I was thinking more along the lines of Voldy getting his ass kicked by Deathscythe. Which would be really cool to s-- read.] (She's very imaginative, so she sees it. Anyway, we'll be back if there isn't more. Tomorrow. And the next day. And the next. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day.) [Shut up already. We're running out of space.] (And the next day.)1 |
Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 11:29 CST
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OMG I loved your last story sorry I didn't review. Your suposed to used "dragged" as past tense. There was this one scene were sirius (I think) saw Hermione moving, it should have been written like so: He didn't see what was dragging Hermione yet she was still being dragged. No offense but that sorta bugged me! I like the start of this story I hope you update soon and that you learn grammer!
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 02:24 CDT
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PLease......Finish I love the story, and i want to know if nin and relena made it out or not.
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Reviewed By: Luinthoron On: June 30, 2004 12:04 CDT
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Hey! I'm back again and just finished re-reading Four Guardians on FFN and this story here. They're still as amazing as I remembered. Any chance to see this finished? And you once mentioned in an Author's Note that you had more of this story planned out for Harry's other years. I hope we'll see them too someday. I know that I'm not the only one who's love to see more of your brilliant writing in these universes.
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess(too lazy ta sign in) On: March 25, 2004 13:55 CST
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as always this is really good :D i hope ya finish it ^_^ ~*~Dark Princess~*~
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess(too lazy ta sign in) On: March 25, 2004 13:54 CST
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Reviewed By: Desperate On: February 11, 2004 02:46 CST
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Look at this you have 38 reveiws more than I will get all with all my fanfiction put together and your not updateing!!! selfish bitch!...mabye thats going a bit overboard...
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Reviewed By: * On: February 11, 2004 02:42 CST
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UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: the dream On: January 28, 2004 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could u have stopped wit this fic?? i read a couple and this one is the coolest one i've read so far. u really should consider continuing this one. it'll come out good no matter what u do with it.
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