| "Harry Potter and the Summer Vacation with the Perfect Soldier" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: HI!!!!! ((That was K-chan, I swear!!))
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 03:48 CST
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(You know, she's either going to think we're insane or she's going to laugh her ass off.) [Let's hope it's the latter.... Though... the former wouldn't be SO bad, we ARE insane...] (Speak for youself, I'm just a fangirl.) [which = insanity.] (I didn't just admit that, I didn't just admit that, I didn't just admit that....) [Well you at least you spell guys you likes' names right.] (That doesn't sound gramatically correct.) [Who cares.] (*sorely tempted to quote Jack Sparrow*) [We have reached a special place...] (AAH!! We haven't said anything review-worthy!!) [Okay, how 'bout... Please write more. I wanna find out what happens next. And I wanna see Voldy get his ass kicked by Deathscythe.] (On another review {wow} note, that we already mentioned the "please write more" part, so it's an official review.) [But now we're giving you a good REASON to write more.] (Yes. Here it is: WE'LL BE BACK.) [No, I was thinking more along the lines of Voldy getting his ass kicked by Deathscythe. Which would be really cool to s-- read.] (She's very imaginative, so she sees it. Anyway, we'll be back if there isn't more. Tomorrow. And the next day. And the next. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day. And the next day.) [Shut up already. We're running out of space.] (And the next day.)1 |
Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 11:29 CST
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OMG I loved your last story sorry I didn't review. Your suposed to used "dragged" as past tense. There was this one scene were sirius (I think) saw Hermione moving, it should have been written like so: He didn't see what was dragging Hermione yet she was still being dragged. No offense but that sorta bugged me! I like the start of this story I hope you update soon and that you learn grammer!
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 02:24 CDT
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PLease......Finish I love the story, and i want to know if nin and relena made it out or not.
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Reviewed By: Luinthoron On: June 30, 2004 12:04 CDT
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Hey! I'm back again and just finished re-reading Four Guardians on FFN and this story here. They're still as amazing as I remembered. Any chance to see this finished? And you once mentioned in an Author's Note that you had more of this story planned out for Harry's other years. I hope we'll see them too someday. I know that I'm not the only one who's love to see more of your brilliant writing in these universes.
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess(too lazy ta sign in) On: March 25, 2004 13:55 CST
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as always this is really good :D i hope ya finish it ^_^ ~*~Dark Princess~*~
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess(too lazy ta sign in) On: March 25, 2004 13:54 CST
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Reviewed By: Desperate On: February 11, 2004 02:46 CST
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Look at this you have 38 reveiws more than I will get all with all my fanfiction put together and your not updateing!!! selfish bitch!...mabye thats going a bit overboard...
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Reviewed By: * On: February 11, 2004 02:42 CST
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UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: the dream On: January 28, 2004 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could u have stopped wit this fic?? i read a couple and this one is the coolest one i've read so far. u really should consider continuing this one. it'll come out good no matter what u do with it.
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Reviewed By: Dark Topaz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to write more I am begging
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Title: NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 12:28 CST
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HOW COULD YOU KILL IT!?!? AARGHH!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Please write more
Reviewed By: Elf_Prince On: November 22, 2003 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more im begging you and post it on ff.net please please please please
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 20:40 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT ENDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND RIGHT WHEN I FOUND THE CONCLUSION!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Luinthoron On: October 17, 2003 10:55 CDT
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Somehow I managed to stumble upon MediaMiner again. And look at this - there were two chapters, more than a year old, that I hadn't even seen... Although there could've been more... Still, thanks for writing those two - can't wait for you to decide to write more of this! :) Marek aka Luinthoron
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Title: UPDATE! PLEASE!
Reviewed By: Hotaru Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm begging you on my hands and knees, ((if I could get there >)) PLEASE! Update! I wanna know what happened next! I do! I do! Update! Please Elf-sama! Bambi
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