| "How the Nurse got her Name" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Valdir On: September 05, 2005 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have not yet finish reading this story, but from what i have read so far i can tell i am going to love it. In my personal opinion you are a great writer. Just thought you might like to hear that. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: ham-ham On: March 12, 2004 20:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn. How can an ordinary, pokemon loving, caring nurse transform into a mad sex animal bent on sadistic pleasure along with the expense of Jenny who got her snatch shaved. Talk about early morning crotch rash. OUCH.
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Reviewed By: joy of jenny On: July 29, 2003 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ow, i didn't know Nurse Joy could be such a slave driving, sex-crazy, orgy machine, lesbian lover, and a normal everyday housewife. |
Reviewed By: _Yume_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
great story! you must finish it! |
Reviewed By: un named On: October 14, 2002 19:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more this is good because there are not vary many good joy and jenny lemons in this site and perhaps they meet ash in the one boat there going to. |
Reviewed By: Masquerade_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 17:16 CDT
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Very nice. I especially like the fact that you didn't use letters and numbers for words throughout the story. That always lessens the mood! I hope you do follow up with the tag, because it'd be interesting to see what happens. |
