| "The Wolf and the Abyssinian" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: evean On: April 25, 2005 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I love you. Write more, please? Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: October 23, 2004 11:49 CDT
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Wow, I don't usually read crossovers but this caught my eye and I was thrilled by how good it was. Saito and Aya make a great couple. It would take someone with a personality like Saito to tame the little kitten. You did a fantastic job of working the crossover characaters into the world of the WK boys. If you just happen to write a sequel to this I promise to read it. (hint! hint!) Thanks for the great read. ^ _ ^
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe...This fic is great! I'd hate to be rude...but Hitoki is the term they use on the time of the Samurai. "Kiri" means cut and Hito means person, so it's Cutting a person. Nower days they say "Hitokoroshi" It means murderer...they have no actual word for assassin just murderer. I've noticed a few Japanese errors but other than that I really like this fic! It's so good!
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Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: July 03, 2004 12:50 CDT
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This was one of the few crossovers that I have really enjoyed reading. I would have never thought about pairing these two. Very well done... Just like Toki Mirage, I hope that there is a sequel to this... :0)
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Reviewed By: SilverKitsune!!! On: February 22, 2004 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*coughs* i'm origionally 'Toki Mirage' on mm.org, but mm.org is being a b*tch and it won't let me sign in or out PROPERLY. it's rather irritating. n e way, GREAT STORY!!! i loved it!!!!!! is there a sequel?? PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S A SEQUEL!!! email: solarstar5@hotmail.com if your not to busy, let me know!!! ^_- arigatou!
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Reviewed By: Nayna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 04:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your fanfic really. it is the first crossover i really liked. i couldn't stop reading and keep on that good work.... ^^ |
Reviewed By: Furie On: December 02, 2002 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it a lot...not many WK RK crossovers
it kept mostly in character which was awesome
just one thing though : Aku. Soku. Zan means Sin. Swift. Slay not Kill. Evil. Instantly. as most ppl think
PS.. VERY good Lemon |
Reviewed By: e? On: October 30, 2002 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I won't bother with so much detail of the spelling/grammar, etc. The Fic is G.O.O.D! ^_^
Clever Idea of Saito and Ran pairing. I love the pairing and boy.. you write the helluva of a lemon. I was drooling when I read 'em ^ ^ ... |
Reviewed By: OpusAnna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great crossover!! I really liked the way you melded the two series together, not to mention the SaitoxAya smut. ^-^ Loved it. |
Reviewed By: ladyjayne On: September 30, 2002 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the great story...i enjoyed the relationship between aya and saito...it was very well done. |
Reviewed By: ladyjayne On: September 30, 2002 01:18 CDT
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well, i just finished chapter three and i'm afraid i have to disagree with you...you most certainly CAN write a lemon...VERY nice. |
