| "Between Two Worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Please Continue
Reviewed By: ShadowedRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. It's so nice to see a consenual Seymour/Tidus. Please tell me you're going to keep going with this. It's too good to leave there. That can't be all that happens. Please please please update again.
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Reviewed By: Hoshiko Saitou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I must say, yours is my favorite Seymour/Tidus fic. Major points on seeing how they're both trapped between worlds. I like how you found the happy medium betwene making him a psyco rapist and a naive child, as I have seen other fics with this pairing turn him into. I'm not so fond of first person, but you did it well, so it didn't take away all that much. Again, yours gets my vote for best one out there.
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Reviewed By: Hoshiko Saitou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must say, yours is my favorite Seymour/Tidus fic. Major points on seeing how they're both trapped between worlds. I like how you found the happy medium betwene making him a psyco rapist and a naive child, as I have seen other fics with this pairing turn him into. I'm not so fond of first person, but you did it well, so it didn't take away all that much. Again, yours gets my vote for best one out there.
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Reviewed By: Suzume Tori ^_^ On: February 15, 2004 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
...I keep checking for updates... you have no idea how depressing it is for me to keep coming back and discovering that you haven't made any to this story... please, please update this story! It is one of the only good SxT fic that I have found thus far on the net.... (thus why I am here, perhaps a year and a half since I first read it, reviewing it in hopes that you will continue...)
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Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really should have gotten a lot more reviews for this... you deserve the praise. I don't usually read first person fics, simply because most writers haven't quite perfected the talent of really getting into a character's mind to write them properly, but you did an excellent job. I've always been a HUGE Seymour fan, and not just because he's pretty ^_^ I always knew there was a deeper part to his soul, and I really think you touched it. Both lemons were exquisitely written. They were both beautiful, and erotic, with imagery that just took my breath away. I spent most of them with my jaw dropped, quite honestly. It's been a really long time since I've read anything of this magnitude. Ra to you, and keep up the grand work!
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Reviewed By: Lady Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit, Seymour and Tidus are not one of my favorite couples. However this piece was too well written to ignore. I appreciate any writer who can make the villain appear 'human', so to speak. Very nicely done, and I look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: game gurl On: February 03, 2003 09:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very nice fanfic, reason:I like reading yaoi filled fanfics |
Reviewed By: Suzume On: November 13, 2002 23:48 CST
Comment/Review:
^____^ It's pretty :D (An' yummy XD) |
