| "The Darkest Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: SPELLING!!
Reviewed By: HotGirl12011 On: July 31, 2004 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it but there is one thing that totally needs a lot of work....YOUR SPELLING!! IT WAS HORRIBLE! You know that pink thing in your mouth its spelled T-O-U-N-G-E!!! Not tong ok!!
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Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 29, 2003 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hella short chapters but i can live hurry up and finish |
Reviewed By: Catie On: June 08, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good! The grammer was ok. The only bad part about it was it was really rushed! Slow down a bit |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: January 04, 2003 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I think that later, Bulma should be raped by frieza! |
Reviewed By: Vegeta'sGurl On: October 09, 2002 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love this but you have to hurry with it. It is getting really good. |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: September 30, 2002 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...i liked it...what more can i say? |
